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sin (Free verse) by ThePariahDog blood under my fingernails
so full of original sin
that my hands tremble at the thought
of being inside you again
will god be angry
with what i have done?
even though i was capricious,
merely seeking fun?
i await judgement
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Posted: November 2, 2003 6:44 PM PST; Last modified: November 2, 2003 6:44 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.119203 Overall Rank: 5701 Comments:
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Jeremi B. Handrinos @ 24.126.116.54
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2-Nov-03/8:03 PM
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Even a dung beetle wouldn't roll this shit.
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