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sin (Free verse) by ThePariahDog
blood under my fingernails so full of original sin that my hands tremble at the thought of being inside you again will god be angry with what i have done? even though i was capricious, merely seeking fun? i await judgement

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.119203
Overall Rank: 5650
Posted: November 2, 2003 6:44 PM PST; Last modified: November 2, 2003 6:44 PM PST
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[n/a] Jeremi B. Handrinos @ 24.126.116.54 | 2-Nov-03/8:03 PM | Reply
Even a dung beetle wouldn't roll this shit.
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