on some deleted poem
17 Aug 2003, 2:47 PM
I agree, a very strong, introspective work. 10.
on Oh holy shit by Lucifer
25 Feb 2003, 5:10 AM
2 (how bad did you want that?)
on Ad patres el prostitute by <{Baba^Yaga}>
24 Feb 2003, 9:12 PM
IT SUCKS!! ADMIT IT!!
on SupremeDreamer by King Abdullah I
8 Jul 2003, 7:30 AM
ha ha ha ha good one good one, in the tradition of Settle. Who is me. Most of my immitators don't get it but I think you do. Childish, insulting, disgusting, strong like a horse's leg yet delicate like a country sausage wrapped in silk.
on At a hotel room in Royal Oak by horus8
6 Jul 2003, 6:32 PM
oh good god no
I bet he drank the check too 10
Why don't you give me 10s anymore?? What's with this 9 bullshit?? Stop toying with me. I'm not a toy.
I bet he drank the check too 10
Why don't you give me 10s anymore?? What's with this 9 bullshit?? Stop toying with me. I'm not a toy.
on Four Chapters from the Detective Plum files by horus8
2 Jun 2003, 1:03 PM
READ AND COMMENT ON MY POEMS
on Final Comment by dougsoderstrom
28 May 2003, 6:45 PM
Keeping the golden rule in mind, I would just like to say GOODBYE TO ALL MY ONLINE FRIENDS FOREVER!!!! *BLAM*
on deleted scenes by Bill Z Bub
27 Apr 2003, 5:53 PM
You know BZB, you and I have a lot in common. You're a terrible draughtsman, I'm a terrible draughtsman. You like limeade, I like limeade. You like writing shit poetry, I like writing shit poetry. You like Linkin' Park...well I can't say I like Linkin' Park. We're not as different as you think! PS Your impostor is horus8, I think. Frankly I have no idea but the smart money's on horus8. Oh and 9 for the poem!! Eggselent work my man!!
on Love Greased by Jeremi B. Handrinos
9 Apr 2003, 9:58 PM
Yes I want to hear it in real vivid audio you mankisser. YOU DIRTY MANKISSER!! btw I don't care if you do bite ears I still love you like my own child. Not as much as I love Boz Scaggs though. Sigh. What a voice. What a sound it makes.
on the photobooth by Bill Z Bub
9 Apr 2003, 10:00 PM
This one's actually pretty good, just remove all the "her bits" at the end (put them somewhere else). The last stanza is a touch uninteresting.
on Ad patres el prostitute by <{Baba^Yaga}>
24 Feb 2003, 8:55 PM
In responses to my comments, you have neglected to write anything about my comments on your poetry. Maybe when you address each feeble point I make I'll stop goading you. If this poem is such the fucking cat's pyjamas it won't take a minute.
on A prayer for my mum by Mr Pig (again)
23 Feb 2003, 2:55 PM
i wish my mother wuz dead so i could write a poeme this beautiful..9..
on some deleted poem
10 Jan 2003, 4:01 PM
Who knew homosexuality was going to chafe that much.
on D.I.Y.M Syndrome by Rilke4ClosetLesbians
22 Aug 2003, 9:58 AM
You might get over this problem if you went down on every guy you met. That way it would be like, yeah, your dick was in my mouth, but so was that guy off in the distance, and also the guy who gave me the key to the changing rooms at Williams Sonoma. And that other guy I saw at Arby's. Etc. I should rewrite this poem for you to make it funny. 6.
on some deleted poem
25 Feb 2003, 4:20 AM
When you decide to Settle, I'll donate a beige wedding dress.
on It's lonely at the top by Jeremi B. Handrinos
31 Dec 2003, 1:17 PM
This is fantastically good.
Also, you should read my Myspace journal.
Also, you should read my Myspace journal.
on It's lonely at the top by Jeremi B. Handrinos
31 Dec 2003, 1:20 PM
Specifically, I am posting a journal entry about you to my myspace journal.
on Tales From The Outhouse by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
31 Jan 2004, 6:01 PM
lol you said Settle
on some deleted poem
8 Mar 2004, 2:59 PM
Why not write a poem about it you impotent fuckface. I mean, fuck, I hate fags. But I hate crappy poets more.