on some deleted poem
9 Jan 2003, 1:23 PM
RGALLET UR THE BEST
on heathen love by w~* ATHENA *~w
10 Jan 2003, 3:06 PM
Plagiarized.
on some deleted poem
10 Jan 2003, 3:01 PM
I think cherish's work is marvelous.
on heathen love by w~* ATHENA *~w
9 Jan 2003, 11:41 PM
suxor my coxor
on some deleted poem
9 Jan 2003, 11:46 PM
I know all three of you are Dark Angel. The game is up, Moriarty.
on Hector's such a drag by Bachus
9 Jan 2003, 10:29 PM
I thought you were gonna replace it with something else. I'm amazed you've turned this into such a masterpiece. I especially like how you took my obnoxious "I don't care bit" and said "I don't care that Jesus was a male Hustler. I don't care".
on Nightwalker by Another Bobjim?!?!
9 Jan 2003, 9:21 PM
I mean fucking come on, "flitting from shadow to shadow"? The drama imagery at the ends sucks shit and the only good line in this is "rough" and the two after it don't make any sense. Just fucking start over and make it worthwhile. THINK OF THE POINT FIRST AND GO FROM THERE.
on Hector's such a drag by Bachus
9 Jan 2003, 10:32 PM
"My life consists of homework, meal preparation and recreation
(like poemranker)." (like poemranker)->(like the discus). That's a bit funnier I think.
(like poemranker)." (like poemranker)->(like the discus). That's a bit funnier I think.
on some deleted poem
9 Jan 2003, 2:43 PM
kicked my ass dude
on some deleted poem
9 Jan 2003, 1:00 PM
nice 1
on some deleted poem
10 Jan 2003, 11:14 AM
ha ha ha