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At a hotel room in Royal Oak (Free verse) by horus8
Sleeping the day away upside down on the couch. The mailslot in the door would open, With a box of light, indiscriminately. A set of eyes. The voice. "You got your rent?". Silently, I put my pants on, and let the question answer itself.

Up the ladder: Avalanche
Down the ladder: Obituary for the Moon

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.8333335
Weighted score: 6.831663
Overall Rank: 344
Posted: July 6, 2003 5:49 PM PDT; Last modified: July 6, 2003 5:49 PM PDT
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[10] dmzoacan @ 67.75.24.247 | 6-Jul-03/6:32 PM | Reply
oh good god no
I bet he drank the check too 10
Why don't you give me 10s anymore?? What's with this 9 bullshit?? Stop toying with me. I'm not a toy.
[n/a] Jeremi B. Handrinos @ 24.126.113.154 > dmzoacan | 6-Jul-03/6:35 PM | Reply
I just did, it took mr. pig in the jump suit.
[8] MrsGretchen @ 12.220.225.71 | 7-Jul-03/1:08 PM | Reply
Something I can share.
[9] daniella @ 200.68.206.91 | 1-Aug-03/4:39 PM | Reply
good show
[n/a] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 > daniella | 1-Aug-03/5:25 PM | Reply
Cheers.
[9] richa @ 81.178.212.6 | 9-Sep-03/8:41 AM | Reply
good this, I meant to comment when you wrote it but my computer crashed.

Of all your poems this one and the if people still dont know why people hate america they should get out some more one are ones that I keep remembering
[10] dancin_n_da_moonlite @ 64.12.116.135 | 25-Jan-05/11:55 AM | Reply
i really like your writing
~are you published?~
<if not you should be>
-mega
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