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At a hotel room in Royal Oak (Free verse) by horus8

Sleeping the day away upside down on the couch. The mailslot in the door would open, With a box of light, indiscriminately. A set of eyes. The voice. "You got your rent?". Silently, I put my pants on, and let the question answer itself.

richa 9-Sep-03/8:41 AM
good this, I meant to comment when you wrote it but my computer crashed.

Of all your poems this one and the if people still dont know why people hate america they should get out some more one are ones that I keep remembering




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