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At a hotel room in Royal Oak (Free verse) by horus8

Sleeping the day away upside down on the couch. The mailslot in the door would open, With a box of light, indiscriminately. A set of eyes. The voice. "You got your rent?". Silently, I put my pants on, and let the question answer itself.

dmzoacan 6-Jul-03/6:32 PM
oh good god no
I bet he drank the check too 10
Why don't you give me 10s anymore?? What's with this 9 bullshit?? Stop toying with me. I'm not a toy.




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