| Re: Poems of Love by BleedingRose |
22-Apr-03/8:42 AM |
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i love line 17 thats good shit!
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| Re: What do you see by Luv2write |
22-Apr-03/9:21 AM |
i feel like that all the time.
and your probly "worthy" of more than you think
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| Re: Understand by Luv2write |
22-Apr-03/9:23 AM |
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i think you should revise the last 3 lines
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
22-Apr-03/9:28 AM |
that was the most horriable poem i have ever given a 9 :)
i like the first half, second half could use a little work
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| Re: Lost by Luv2write |
22-Apr-03/9:33 AM |
very good!
oh and btw, if you find my sanity wile your lost, try to rember where you saw it. i've been looking for it for years.......i wonder where it went......
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| Re: Life by Luv2write |
22-Apr-03/9:37 AM |
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i see where your comming from. needs more style
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| Re: ForMyFriend, Joneel by Luv2write |
22-Apr-03/9:40 AM |
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not your best work. good though
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| Re: "Life can sure be a motherfucker." by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
23-Apr-03/8:48 AM |
very moving, i really like the last part about quoting your self befor you get to say anything :)
when sobrioty blows...
smoke a bowl.
when reailty nocks....
turn your locks.
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| Re: Household Sex Agents (tooles) by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
23-Apr-03/8:53 AM |
many improtant lessons in this..... very good
10
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| Re: The Bleeding Rose by BleedingRose |
24-Apr-03/7:12 AM |
not as good as your other ones, at least in my opinion.
still not bad, and mostly better than mine.... bastard
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
30-Apr-03/8:32 AM |
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good but it ended to abruptly
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| Re: Never Better by casey |
9-May-03/6:53 AM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
13-May-03/6:35 AM |
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ya i downed a lot one day befor school, because i heard it made you trip, well it didnt, but it did make me sick
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| Re: Plastic Posies by BleedingRose |
29-May-03/5:57 AM |
very nice, i should get my girlfriend some plastic posies.....oh wait i dont have one...
anyway, damn good poem.
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| Re: Twilight's Sweet Embrace by kassanna |
30-May-03/11:22 AM |
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| Re: Afraid to love you by lil cindy lu who |
30-May-03/11:23 AM |
i love it
found my self singing along :) -9-
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
30-May-03/11:26 AM |
i know how it feels
very good -8-
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| Re: Techno Whore by hotwire |
3-Jun-03/6:19 AM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
3-Jun-03/6:28 AM |
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dont leave just cause some asses are telling you off, some people would like to read your poems and also like to have your responce to theirs.
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| Re: sorry, but i am lame by nolan |
4-Jun-03/6:23 AM |
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that was good -8- not near as lame as i was expciting
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