| Re: Understand by Luv2write |
22-Apr-03/9:23 AM |
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i think you should revise the last 3 lines
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| Re: Household Sex Agents (tooles) by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
23-Apr-03/8:53 AM |
many improtant lessons in this..... very good
10
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| Re: Afraid to love you by lil cindy lu who |
30-May-03/11:23 AM |
i love it
found my self singing along :) -9-
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| Re: The Bleeding Rose by BleedingRose |
24-Apr-03/7:12 AM |
not as good as your other ones, at least in my opinion.
still not bad, and mostly better than mine.... bastard
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| Re: Twilight's Sweet Embrace by kassanna |
30-May-03/11:22 AM |
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| Re: sorry, but i am lame by nolan |
4-Jun-03/6:23 AM |
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that was good -8- not near as lame as i was expciting
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
3-Jun-03/6:28 AM |
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dont leave just cause some asses are telling you off, some people would like to read your poems and also like to have your responce to theirs.
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30-May-03/11:26 AM |
i know how it feels
very good -8-
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| Re: Plastic Posies by BleedingRose |
29-May-03/5:57 AM |
very nice, i should get my girlfriend some plastic posies.....oh wait i dont have one...
anyway, damn good poem.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
13-May-03/6:35 AM |
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ya i downed a lot one day befor school, because i heard it made you trip, well it didnt, but it did make me sick
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| Re: "Life can sure be a motherfucker." by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
23-Apr-03/8:48 AM |
very moving, i really like the last part about quoting your self befor you get to say anything :)
when sobrioty blows...
smoke a bowl.
when reailty nocks....
turn your locks.
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| Re: Lost by Luv2write |
22-Apr-03/9:33 AM |
very good!
oh and btw, if you find my sanity wile your lost, try to rember where you saw it. i've been looking for it for years.......i wonder where it went......
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| Re: ForMyFriend, Joneel by Luv2write |
22-Apr-03/9:40 AM |
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not your best work. good though
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| Re: Poems of Love by BleedingRose |
22-Apr-03/8:42 AM |
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i love line 17 thats good shit!
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| Re: What do you see by Luv2write |
22-Apr-03/9:21 AM |
i feel like that all the time.
and your probly "worthy" of more than you think
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
22-Apr-03/9:28 AM |
that was the most horriable poem i have ever given a 9 :)
i like the first half, second half could use a little work
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| Re: Life by Luv2write |
22-Apr-03/9:37 AM |
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i see where your comming from. needs more style
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| Re: Techno Whore by hotwire |
3-Jun-03/6:19 AM |
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| Re: Never Better by casey |
9-May-03/6:53 AM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
30-Apr-03/8:32 AM |
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good but it ended to abruptly
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