| Re: knocked down to look up by singinkygal |
17-Jan-04/12:24 PM |
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Sure it wasn't knocked up to look down?
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| Re: happy b'day maria by yeats1 |
17-Jan-04/12:24 PM |
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| Re: How rifted by Crakyamuni |
17-Jan-04/12:18 PM |
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Tell me though what were the 'radicals' arranging? Another stupid fucking 7 Eleven for you and your friends to stand in front of after school?
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| Re: How rifted by Crakyamuni |
17-Jan-04/12:17 PM |
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The best thing about this poem is your name.
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| Re: Liberty! by fevriere |
17-Jan-04/12:16 PM |
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Or do you think that if you keep repeating the word Liberty it will turn into a concrete poem.
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| Re: Liberty! by fevriere |
17-Jan-04/12:15 PM |
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Is it shaped like concrete?
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| Re: Up. by fevriere |
14-Jan-04/4:11 PM |
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| Re: Dry Beast Night by fevriere |
14-Jan-04/1:54 PM |
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Good, but irk? My ownly complaint would be a touch muddled, but highly imaginative. Structure was flawless, bravo.
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| Re: a comment on Billy Bytack Forces His Children To Sell Jesus by horus8 |
13-Jan-04/6:25 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Lynched by Bachus |
12-Jan-04/9:42 PM |
lol, a classic.
That should be the title of your first poetry book.
I'll fucking publish it, she-it.
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| Re: She Said by TheWhiteLion777 |
12-Jan-04/9:40 PM |
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That was a fine impression of a six headed wombat, but I was looking for an lemon lemur in pine scent?
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| Re: New commandments by little_big_nose |
12-Jan-04/12:43 PM |
There once was a twisted poof wizard
that had the poetical skills of a lizard
that had died on the road
humping a horny toad
With a leaky chode set to explode.
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| Re: a comment on New commandments by little_big_nose |
12-Jan-04/12:39 PM |
I have a pet beaver that's sad
Because it lives in a Pitt that's not Brad
And now my Jeniffer's Anistons
Depressed in uzbekistanian
Without lovely Brad's nad.
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| Re: a comment on New commandments by little_big_nose |
12-Jan-04/12:34 PM |
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| Re: American Eden v.2 [revised] by SupremeDreamer |
12-Jan-04/12:30 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Malaysia by Crakyamuni |
11-Jan-04/12:31 AM |
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Dude? It's not that bad! relax. I love casteneda but got very little from the last two lines. Consentrate, and relax and fix them. You'll do fine.
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| Re: a comment on Fake Happiness by WithoutLife |
10-Jan-04/6:51 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Fake Happiness by WithoutLife |
10-Jan-04/6:50 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Fake Happiness by WithoutLife |
10-Jan-04/6:48 PM |
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Watching the two of you discuss sentence structure? Is like watching two chikens fucking a spent tampon.
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| Re: Malaysia by Crakyamuni |
10-Jan-04/6:46 PM |
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Jesus, your end chucks it? It was great until the last two lines? Do I have to teach you how to end a poem?
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