on knocked down to look up by singinkygal
17 Jan 2004, 12:24 PM
Sure it wasn't knocked up to look down?
on happy b'day maria by yeats1
17 Jan 2004, 12:24 PM
Yeats huh? Yeah right.
on How rifted by Crakyamuni
17 Jan 2004, 12:18 PM
Tell me though what were the 'radicals' arranging? Another stupid fucking 7 Eleven for you and your friends to stand in front of after school?
on How rifted by Crakyamuni
17 Jan 2004, 12:17 PM
The best thing about this poem is your name.
on Dry Beast Night by fevriere
14 Jan 2004, 1:54 PM
Good, but irk? My ownly complaint would be a touch muddled, but highly imaginative. Structure was flawless, bravo.
replying on Billy Bytack Forces His Children To Sell Jesus by horus8
13 Jan 2004, 6:25 PM
One ear at a time.
on She Said by TheWhiteLion777
12 Jan 2004, 9:40 PM
That was a fine impression of a six headed wombat, but I was looking for an lemon lemur in pine scent?
on New commandments by little_big_nose
12 Jan 2004, 12:43 PM
There once was a twisted poof wizard
that had the poetical skills of a lizard
that had died on the road
humping a horny toad
With a leaky chode set to explode.
that had the poetical skills of a lizard
that had died on the road
humping a horny toad
With a leaky chode set to explode.
replying on New commandments by little_big_nose
12 Jan 2004, 12:39 PM
I have a pet beaver that's sad
Because it lives in a Pitt that's not Brad
And now my Jeniffer's Anistons
Depressed in uzbekistanian
Without lovely Brad's nad.
Because it lives in a Pitt that's not Brad
And now my Jeniffer's Anistons
Depressed in uzbekistanian
Without lovely Brad's nad.
replying on New commandments by little_big_nose
12 Jan 2004, 12:34 PM
Yeah, but... Come on?
on American Eden v.2 [revised] by SupremeDreamer
12 Jan 2004, 12:30 PM
Canonic... sweit.
replying on Malaysia by Crakyamuni
11 Jan 2004, 12:31 AM
Dude? It's not that bad! relax. I love casteneda but got very little from the last two lines. Consentrate, and relax and fix them. You'll do fine.
replying on Fake Happiness by WithoutLife
10 Jan 2004, 6:51 PM
nicely put.
replying on Fake Happiness by WithoutLife
10 Jan 2004, 6:50 PM
clap clap clap.
replying on Fake Happiness by WithoutLife
10 Jan 2004, 6:48 PM
Watching the two of you discuss sentence structure? Is like watching two chikens fucking a spent tampon.
on Malaysia by Crakyamuni
10 Jan 2004, 6:46 PM
Jesus, your end chucks it? It was great until the last two lines? Do I have to teach you how to end a poem?