Re: a comment on it's slow time by silvertongueddevil	10-Jan-04/6:45 PM
Why? because you're fucking stupid?
Re: a comment on Fake Happiness by WithoutLife	10-Jan-04/10:28 AM
Perhaps, you're reading the poems under 'everyone' and not his pen name?
Re: a comment on Fake Happiness by WithoutLife	10-Jan-04/10:27 AM
You should channel that anger into taking the time to speak clearly.
Re: a comment on Fake Happiness by WithoutLife	10-Jan-04/10:25 AM
Once, in the jungles of your asshole I battled the great beast 'Sumptin'. After severing its face from it's lower intestine I crawled out a new man, though wet and covered in smegma. So when you say "fuck my spelling" are you trying to take our focus off of you being a lazy retard, by convincing us that you make up for your lack of writing skills with 'feelings'? How do you expect to convey feelings to your audience of 0 if you can't even form the words to describe a feeling to fucking begin with? Perhaps, you'll send us all snap shots of you beating yourself into the shape of a poem with 'feelings' with a ten foot turd bat with your initials on the handle you nicknamed Beefer? Hack.
Re: a comment on Fake Happiness by WithoutLife	10-Jan-04/10:24 AM
Don't be. We're not. You're excused.
Re: Fake Happiness by WithoutLife	10-Jan-04/10:10 AM
I must agree with everyone. this sets new perimeters to cliche poetry, and very well could be the secret missing formula. But the line "sweet snacks of out get together". made me laugh and itch ring worm.
Re: a comment on Fake Happiness by WithoutLife	10-Jan-04/10:07 AM
Everyone happens to be the best we've got here, so take it or leave it. I , personally, learned how to spell 'bumpercarhooking' from everyone, and now my home squishes think I'm the chiz.
Re: a comment on Fake Happiness by WithoutLife	9-Jan-04/8:20 PM
Your spelling skills, and nose are proof enough that you shouldn't be reading poetry either.
Re: Ode to the Wolf by Cougarchic	9-Jan-04/1:01 PM
I like how you used slyly and sly in the same poem with a fox to describe a wolf? Pumagirl!!! yay for you! This is hardly an ode? there's no indians, no game tax, no wolf boots? what kind of poet are you? This is a chode to lemurs if anything.
Re: Runaway by Cougarchic	9-Jan-04/12:57 PM
So your saying don't run away? Jog in? walk within? Do the homeless have a harmonica or a quartet around a burn barrel?
Re: My Castle by Cougarchic	9-Jan-04/12:51 PM
A steaming turd just bristling with activity.
Re: Snowboarding, Sierra Nevada, 12/31/03 by Plaidypus	3-Jan-04/3:42 AM
how you endowed angels and demons into this poem is why you are hopeless.
Re: Too obvious by INTRANSIT	3-Jan-04/1:32 AM
Have you ever got a zit in your ear?!!!!!! It's fucking murder.
Re: Rape by titan69	3-Jan-04/1:30 AM
Yeah, well... It parallels the writing.
Re: a comment on Faith by Pervy Elf	30-Dec-03/9:07 PM
I love to hate your guts.
Re: a comment on Faith by Pervy Elf	30-Dec-03/2:25 PM
God is simply positively charged atoms working in a universe of strings. You don't have to perpetuate your money or children or control to understand god is not having to control anything. You should study up on some budhism and get with it. This christian god thing is as pathetic as the pagan green man all the way to the egyptiand ra to jesus, to budha, to the garden the floods the angels the space men the krishna it's all the same, it wasn't until the fucking jews decided to starrt writing it all down the way they wanted to in order to regain control of the women and their goddess religions that shitted started to go south. I bet you haven't even read the bible? I bet I could up end evry fucking article of faith you've ever stood on, sentence by sentence. 300,000 years since neanderthal went cro magnun, and you're talking about faith while at the same time passing judgement. Here's some news. You are both wrong and simple minded.
Re: a comment on Faith by Pervy Elf	30-Dec-03/2:16 PM
"The final step of control"? What are you falling asleep watching the sci fi channel. If anyone is out for control it's religion and all you fucking faith and land mongers. Selling 700 club prayer towels and taking advantage of peoples lose fucking change. Causing every war to date. Yeah, he's your faith right here. Blind and usual. Ever wonder wht John the babtist was beheaded. It was because he was a psychotic asshole that couldn't mind his own fucking business.
Re: a comment on Cupid promised me, Nadine by Shardik	29-Dec-03/6:09 PM
Any friend just would have said hey jeremi you know this is only soso here's a 6.? See, how that works, so if he wants to drop my pants and try to punk me out because he's a stiff? Fuck him and fuck you. Two can play at that game.
Re: a comment on Cupid promised me, Nadine by Shardik	29-Dec-03/6:05 PM
And I say this because it's the obvious. Every thing I've ever written is't properly punctuated, and it's all first drafts. he knows that, I obviously know that. WE're all staring at the fucking thing everyday right? So I've know christof for a couple of years, and he's a great poet. he doesn't have to plsy his fucking pretentious little game with me? Where he comes over and says "blah blah blah"? well duh, he's he telling the obvious too? Himself? Certainly not me. the audience. He could of just given the thing a 0 and kept his 12th grade lesson to himself. he knows that this poem as well as all of them weren't put there because they are good? Idiot, they we're put there by rockmage, and it's obvious why? they are all my worst work. So it's no fucking mystery. But see, I think it's stupid to walk up to a zebra and say hey you're striped? Well no shit? Everyone knows I can't spell, I don't edit, my grammar is shit, and I run on nothing but hate and imagination. So yeah to answer your question. that's exactly what I'm saying. Because of my shit education, and life you know? (drugs, fucking my mom, prison, prostitution) That's the only thing him a dark angel ever say. It's old news boring. Get it now? Good, now go fuck your face with a three speed blender, idiot.
Re: a comment on Cupid promised me, Nadine by Shardik	29-Dec-03/5:54 PM
Yes, I said that and. Also that I think your all fucking idiots. And, I believe, uninventive stiffs, pretty much?So you aren't a complete idiot after all. Do you think some how I'm not aware of what I'm saying. Perhaps I can hire you to follow me around all day and repeat me. How much for that?