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How rifted (Free verse) by Crakyamuni
The rift between us is thinner than trust,
all things taken into a heaven forsaken,
follow this logic into my lack of the tragic,
shadows of december, years of false magic
Constant creatures of hapless habits
I stumble on corpses in this sea of senses
laughing so loudly as they claw at the fences
yet sitting as silent as my darkest defenses
Never not known for the sake of alone
imagining the faded, my facade, my throne
this dance is a distance a chane for a changing
the radicals were free and often arranging.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.25
Weighted score: 5.029801
Overall Rank: 7318
Posted: January 16, 2004 12:28 PM PST; Last modified: January 16, 2004 12:28 PM PST
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