Re: Ode to Larkbeat Twoshoes by Nicholas Jones	6-Dec-02/5:33 PM
amazing. like speaking life into a rib.
Re: Deep Inner Pain by razorgrin	5-Dec-02/9:03 PM
tomorrows headline.."man hijacks plane with saran wrap"!? he could use it as rope and a weapon..tie them up, then let them pick either smothering or bleeding to death..weird wild stuff. sorry about your arm and your cookies. 8.o
Re: a comment on Spider by Blade	5-Dec-02/6:11 PM
As usuall you forgot the only two that work. speed and heroin. What exactly do drugs have to do with this? Apparently, everything.
Re: I Am A Poor Little Boy In The Land Of Love by sweetzephyr	4-Dec-02/4:37 PM
it was worth a shit while you were loved by another and oblivious because... but then in the last 4 or 5 sentences you bite your tail off by trying to criticize those with deep pockets...simply because anyone with half a brain understands the uselessness that accompanies the jealousy-guilt of that sentiment.6. i love the penny in the boys purse though.. nice twist..not lemonade mind you, but damn tasty still.
Re: Girlz by liljsmith87	4-Dec-02/4:30 PM
can i ask you a sincere question? WHAT IN THE FUCK ARE YOU BABBLING ABOUT, AND WHAT EXACTLY CONVINCED YOU SPECIFICALLY speaking, THAT ANYONE SERIOUS ABOUT WRITING WOULD GIVE A FUCK?!
Re: The Limerick of Dave by worldsofwar	4-Dec-02/4:26 PM
to self absorb. wow did i say that? sure did. grand funks on...gotta go. 5.
Re: flight by soccer23	4-Dec-02/4:24 PM
passe. 6.
Re: The wonderful happy relationship between two wonderful and caring people by Dark Angle	4-Dec-02/4:19 PM
finely crafted...like a deer antler pipe in the hand of a drueling lazy boy chaired drunk uncle.
Re: Superhuman - Nature - Hero by royalflesh	3-Dec-02/3:46 PM
3rd stanza should be fixed...it might be better.."what?....what are you thinking?" same with third sentence in third stanza...with "your" kiss is more personable than undying...might i have touched you? then differently is the only word, last sentence...the first two stanzas are incredible..really.8.
Re: The Magician by Hooman	2-Dec-02/3:44 PM
science is a tool...i would argue faith is a tool, and science is a study of natural formulas used to define what's around us and effecting us on a levels at all times.y
Re: Embarrassed by Goose	2-Dec-02/3:07 PM
definition 84 in the thespians hand book..
Re: Left, Cold by Tibbs	2-Dec-02/3:01 PM
sounds like an ethiopian homonid dig...lucy's footprints.8.??
Re: Iced by debased	2-Dec-02/12:54 AM
two problems: title and last sentence....titles weak, because it's not a tractor beam, and it should...and that's how you should end it...with....taking out "ever will"...cuz we all know it will. and put should.w
Re: a comment on Fall from Love's Grace by loneshadow29	1-Dec-02/5:11 PM
that's biologically impossible. a fly doesn't have the mental capacity to understand, or be effected by, the introduction of lysergic acid into its blood stream. it would die before it could fly. unless you could hit it mid flight with a squirt gun. interesting.i
Re: Live from Boise Idaho...the cads! by Bachus	1-Dec-02/4:54 PM
you are ill man, get a life.n
Re: a comment on Clive Barker's penis pump by horus8	30-Nov-02/5:52 PM
figured. no she's pretty. petite dark hair. really nice, kind hearted.. the usual..hows the powder? i'm going tomorrow! to see the snow that is and carve it up, my minds starting to matrix out i feel like nentwined all pecked out..i need clean white snow.see that's denial..
Re: a comment on Clive Barker's penis pump by horus8	30-Nov-02/5:46 PM
the amount of money i've made from writing could fit in a halved walnut, how about you? i know you gotta make some cash somehow. you write just as much as me at one needs time to do that, unless one does both at the same time. also for my christmas present i want you to read ye olde gilded stumps out loud. we can fit it for cards in a small microphone with memory, or make stuffed animals that tell the story ..we could make emough money to starve more children in third world countries. whatta ya say?t
Re: a comment on Clive Barker's penis pump by horus8	30-Nov-02/5:04 PM
i do. you don't have to underline anything. it doesn't bother me. i'm just bored and reacting. i wouldn't have put any of it up, if i didn't want to project certain ideas into a reader or listener's mind to begin with. d.a.so it's cool. i thought by creating this totally anti pop pop cheese ball character (4 years ago 'horus8') in the bowels of hollywood complete with a kid and all of these other hangups like hustling and prison and shit like that it would create you know a 360 degree trap that's the "out of the bag before the bag" true hollywood story. not for a moment did i assume anyone could belief such utter off the wall shit like what's in the horus8 bio, for instance the name horus in egyptian mythology fits perfect upon the character, no mother..no father..on and on.. self educated blee blah blo..it's a present day rip off of the old story..now what is actually true or what isn't doesn't really matter..it's about how it's being told...with "quotes" and all the famous actor's and producers references pumping it up the sexy model all that shit. (we are really all quite obese and addicted to drugs and acne scarred)..it's a twist on what they try and make every artist do..you know create this superficial background and tragedy with parrots and private schools...now for christ sake can we finally just get past all of this horse shit and move on to future projects? thankyou. p.s you don't have to retort in anyway with me d.a i've read all of your titty twisters enough to get 'it', and you no i love it all maddly..now can we both go back into hiding? quit pantsing me.i
Re: A certain kind of misanthropy. by Plasticgirlwithgun	30-Nov-02/2:23 PM
little tommy shookiedoo was a hell of a polo player he would score and clinch it in the third chucker. his daddy rewarded him with plastic for his date later on with susie vonschnickleheimer. they were in love.they had plastic..things were perfectly rotten..in a accurately horrifying way...yes..yes.l
Re: a comment on Clive Barker's penis pump by horus8	30-Nov-02/1:56 PM
-=Dark_Angel=-. You bloat me, if only because you disprove it's possible for anyone so socially retarted to give a fuck about the illusion in front of the 'reallity' of it all, but than constantly deny how you consistantly smell it out to stick your fat fucking face in it, then say you don't (mr. paradox works in the biggest circus of all)..EXCEPT WHEN IT COMES TO MY SON MICAH BLAH BLAH then you come over like a proud peacock plucked clean to shit, and toe dirt scratch, but better than a barnyard chicken, A PEACOCK! throw your head back and prance off to sit on the fence all day (thanks for proving to me that john ashcroft got his edge and a collection of paperweights..congradulations) oh also heres to your long lineage of ass studying ancestory..wait i take it all back. You're a bank teller. smile and don't forget to clock out. i bet you think it pisses me off when you write things like that about my son and and sex life and mode's of operating?...you really must not get out very much? did you know that deep sea monsters are capable of creating their own light and using it..to attract food, the end game is about patience, and you get by far more hate mail than me uncle tom. i don't hate you though.. i love you like jesus loved all of his children. come sing on my lap.e