| Re: The wreck of a Memphis-Atlanta Greyhound by zodiac |
17-Dec-04/2:37 PM |
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| Re: Into My World by sliver |
21-Dec-04/4:34 PM |
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Any fuck that cries on a rose, and then tries to turn it into shit poetry should be SHOT.
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| Re: What is that I seek again? by Bhaskaryya |
22-Dec-04/1:16 AM |
A cliche homerun of shit.
Talk about forced rhyme?
What about forced plain old
Bad droll writing? This
Is a plate full of nut sack.
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| Re: Sidestepping Stupor by PsydewaysTears |
22-Dec-04/1:19 AM |
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| Re: The Wandering Jew by Lifeboatman |
22-Dec-04/1:27 AM |
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| Re: Impatience always backfires 913 by notule |
22-Dec-04/1:31 AM |
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| Re: 10.25.04 by oneglove |
22-Dec-04/10:57 PM |
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You must be a gothic marauder.
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| Re: Drowned in Free Verse by auscot |
22-Dec-04/10:59 PM |
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| Re: I have Learned to Let Go by Joe-joe |
22-Dec-04/11:00 PM |
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The raping of a wet hand towel.
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| Re: Andrew part II by Spindle |
22-Dec-04/11:03 PM |
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"Absolute chestnut!!" I could not best this comment, so here it is again. (For some reason every time I read it, I burst).
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| Re: The Slave by Bhaskaryya |
22-Dec-04/11:07 PM |
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Sounds like that neeger wants a leetle white wheestle.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
30-Dec-04/1:21 PM |
You're really good!
Who taught you how to write?
Robert Smith?
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
30-Dec-04/1:23 PM |
My only problem is the word 'knife'
Here's a thought, now I'm nowhere
As professional a writer as you,
but what if you changed all
Instances where you use the word
'knife' and substitute it for the
Word 'Aloofa'? What do you think?
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| Re: mutiny by Bill Z Bub |
5-Jan-05/1:21 AM |
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| Re: War Story by dougsoderstrom |
6-Jan-05/1:33 PM |
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Good God man, will you please learn how to fucking write?
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
6-Jan-05/1:35 PM |
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Right... you give way too many idiots way too much promise. What we need, are more tsunamis.
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| Re: Affairs by Stacy Stewart |
6-Jan-05/1:36 PM |
Should start every line with 'tis'
And just put this poem entirely out
of it's misery instead of dicking around.
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| Re: Ghostly Rememberance by Beyond_Dreams |
6-Jan-05/1:37 PM |
Jesus fucking christ.
Why weren't you in Asia instead
of the dingy supermodel
we need more stories like
This! 11!
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
6-Jan-05/1:39 PM |
Whoa was noah's pimp.
This realization has blown my wad.
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| Re: The Mighty Brahmaputra by Bhaskaryya |
8-Jan-05/12:33 PM |
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An ass-sandwich, holding the pickle.
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