on 10.25.04 by oneglove
22 Dec 2004, 10:57 PM
You must be a gothic marauder.
on Drowned in Free Verse by auscot
22 Dec 2004, 10:59 PM
Funny
on I have Learned to Let Go by Joe-joe
22 Dec 2004, 11:00 PM
The raping of a wet hand towel.
on The wreck of a Memphis-Atlanta Greyhound by zodiac
17 Dec 2004, 2:37 PM
Furny...
on Andrew part II by Spindle
22 Dec 2004, 11:03 PM
"Absolute chestnut!!" I could not best this comment, so here it is again. (For some reason every time I read it, I burst).
on War Story by dougsoderstrom
6 Jan 2005, 1:33 PM
Good God man, will you please learn how to fucking write?
on Into My World by sliver
21 Dec 2004, 4:34 PM
Any fuck that cries on a rose, and then tries to turn it into shit poetry should be SHOT.
on What is that I seek again? by Bhaskaryya
22 Dec 2004, 1:16 AM
A cliche homerun of shit.
Talk about forced rhyme?
What about forced plain old
Bad droll writing? This
Is a plate full of nut sack.
Talk about forced rhyme?
What about forced plain old
Bad droll writing? This
Is a plate full of nut sack.
on Sidestepping Stupor by PsydewaysTears
22 Dec 2004, 1:19 AM
Nicely done.
on The Wandering Jew by Lifeboatman
22 Dec 2004, 1:27 AM
lol, yep
on Impatience always backfires 913 by notule
22 Dec 2004, 1:31 AM
Flucked
on some deleted poem
6 Jan 2005, 1:35 PM
Right... you give way too many idiots way too much promise. What we need, are more tsunamis.
on The Slave by Bhaskaryya
22 Dec 2004, 11:07 PM
Sounds like that neeger wants a leetle white wheestle.
on some deleted poem
30 Dec 2004, 1:21 PM
You're really good!
Who taught you how to write?
Robert Smith?
Who taught you how to write?
Robert Smith?
on some deleted poem
30 Dec 2004, 1:23 PM
My only problem is the word 'knife'
Here's a thought, now I'm nowhere
As professional a writer as you,
but what if you changed all
Instances where you use the word
'knife' and substitute it for the
Word 'Aloofa'? What do you think?
Here's a thought, now I'm nowhere
As professional a writer as you,
but what if you changed all
Instances where you use the word
'knife' and substitute it for the
Word 'Aloofa'? What do you think?
on Affairs by Stacy Stewart
6 Jan 2005, 1:36 PM
Should start every line with 'tis'
And just put this poem entirely out
of it's misery instead of dicking around.
And just put this poem entirely out
of it's misery instead of dicking around.
on Ghostly Rememberance by Beyond_Dreams
6 Jan 2005, 1:37 PM
Jesus fucking christ.
Why weren't you in Asia instead
of the dingy supermodel
we need more stories like
This! 11!
Why weren't you in Asia instead
of the dingy supermodel
we need more stories like
This! 11!
on some deleted poem
6 Jan 2005, 1:39 PM
Whoa was noah's pimp.
This realization has blown my wad.
This realization has blown my wad.
on mutiny by Bill Z Bub
5 Jan 2005, 1:21 AM
What's up pimp.
on The Mighty Brahmaputra by Bhaskaryya
8 Jan 2005, 12:33 PM
An ass-sandwich, holding the pickle.