Re: The story of the myopic fishwife OR She: A muse t' me by ==Doylum	17-Aug-02/10:55 PM
the spooning, or the pharmocueds and porn..well..we could learn something from one anothers nude bent to comfort sentiments as far as the spooning goes, and the other answer would be cuz the re(pub)licans are in office, and we know how they feel about abortions and petty drug arrests, not to (overall point is sexy porn stars are afraid to knock boots and get loaded due to late night abuse by undersexed fossil fuel lobbyists. shit! none of that made a bit of sense did it..okay i'll settle for 'why not'?...speaking of settle..wonder where he's been hiding lately?
regarding some deleted poem...	18-Aug-02/12:19 AM
i have come back to apologize and re-read this, i was a bit immature and judgemental with my prior assesment. i'm sorry. in all dire irony i now know that i have become what i despised the most, so buried by my own lies and choices, the reasoning behind my drive and dedication to life, literature, and love have fallen prey to my childish insecurities and lack of integrity...i have unfortunately become my asp tongued mother without really even having met her (except for the 8 months in hawaii when i was five) i have been escaping ever since in one form or another, and in all honesty i'm afraid to appreciate myself and living. i hurt everyone who loves me regardless of my pitfalls, because i apparently feel that i don't deserve to be loved. i think this haiku has come back to haunt me in a way i no longer choose to discuss. once again, i'm sorry.
Re: Chain Reaction by Voth269	18-Aug-02/1:51 AM
you must have minored in creative writing and meteorology, cuz that's exactly as it happens. i've graphed it complete with a detailed outline that accompanies.
Re: love your mother: by Sapphire	18-Aug-02/1:53 AM
i wonder who's retarded evil twin this is...da..oh..ah..nevermind
Re: Time by NeeMan	18-Aug-02/1:55 AM
"nice poem"maintains it's own presence well. well..well enough..7/10
Re: Yes Sir by wolfgang	18-Aug-02/1:57 AM
good, i hope so...shell tricks are notoriously fast and arousing!
Re: The story of the myopic fishwife OR She: A muse t' me by ==Doylum	18-Aug-02/2:03 AM
you are a cheeky devil..i like that seven oclock bit..way to through off the blood hounds..you're a crafty mick that's for certain, i think it was rather 5 hours earlier than seven..then again i am a paranoid insomniac.maskless and subject now to natural erosion. damn. good nite
Re: Summertime by KatieKaBoom	18-Aug-02/5:03 AM
or never cum at all...i came...
Re: Black Buns by Bachus	19-Aug-02/12:16 AM
larry rivers...my friend is dead and i was psychicly attacked last night, make a point you spic, or don't talk to me about pointless shit..if you wanna finally talk art, music,or movies and literature let me know..if you wanna play games, pull out scrabble and make a poem ' de atitude'. or what what's your fucking point p&k? do you have a kid? would you like to be catagorized by some uncommunicative light weight who claims to walk the earth...larry fucking rivers walked the earth with kerouac, and ginsberg, he was a wonderful poet, artist-proto-pop modern art sly devil fox. who tongue and cheeked the world wiyh his magnificent observations. heres a quote just for you, you gifted well read slam poety from kansas...."cubism didn't find me, iblew a joint with some friends in a gutter, and thought picasso...yeah.i can do that.why not i'm just a kid from the bronx, who hung out with beat' jews who were from harlem before harlem was black...he played the sax, in the 13th st. band, and one time, one time jackson pollock even tried to run over one of his sculptors at a mutual friends housee
regarding some deleted poem...	19-Aug-02/8:41 PM
jesu can! if you fix line 9,and 18...but only if you've been circumsizedand you're from the 'chosen' creed. 5
Re: sweet dreams by wolfgang	19-Aug-02/8:48 PM
how in the fuck do you illuminate a candle? with a spotlight, and your use of the past tense in the present would make a real german like mozart, chew his way through bone dirt and wood to find you, to chew!
Re: A Tender Kiss by Jody Conn	19-Aug-02/8:53 PM
more pointless lesbian trivia...wow! you're so brave to be outright gay and proud. unite.unite carprt munchers unite..we've been repressed by phallic symbols and the "man" for too long, lets worship the stink of true love and vaginad tongu flicks...leonard cohen would break his guitar over your head in spanishy bound exctasy.g
Re: A Tender Kiss by Jody Conn	19-Aug-02/8:54 PM
more pointless lesbian trivia...wow! you're so brave to be outright gay and proud. unite.unite carprt munchers unite..we've been repressed by phallic symbols and the "man" for too long, lets worship the stink of true love and vaginad tongu flicks...leonard cohen would break his guitar over your head in spanishy bound exctasy.g
Re: Heavenly HOst! by gay	19-Aug-02/9:09 PM
what a fucking waste of web space. dark angel, granted is a pretty creative writer, but lets have a little self fuckibg respect "for the love of god, your groveling impudence has forced me to de-cork yet another bottle of merlot....this is trite hog wash to put it mildly, to put it harshly, this is pan's clefted hoof squashing his own piled shit in a moment of fairy fucking debauchery...it stinks man pure and simple...neither amusing or serious, somewhere in between shitsville, wyoming, and sawdust, delaware...you are a chinese snakefish that can'y even speak chineses
Re: A Tender Kiss by Jody Conn	19-Aug-02/9:24 PM
hey z ...let me guess? you were eating huh...hope it is was good.. we all deserve a great meal after the trials of the remedial day...i'd love to cook for you and introduce you to my family and friends if you're ever in my neck of the woods, just say so, i'll put you up for a few nights...and show some of the better aspects of la. glad you got home safe...your friend h....o
regarding some deleted poem...	20-Aug-02/12:11 PM
Don't even sweat that shit p&k, i woke up this morning with zeros everywhere too, not to mention death threat e-mails, and a coward's invented horus8 sex family video sent to me(also e-mail) saying all kinds of lovely venomous tripe with an attachment so fucking moving i had to laugh, and forgive the sick gesture. most assuredly all from the mind of a fat pimply faced seventeen year old with a radish plugged ass and a columbine relationship with their existence..then again it could of always been a 40 year old carpet munching cock hater who wishes she could have kids, but unfortunately daddy left booted her cunt so many times her filopian tubes are tangled, and she's just jealous that some people can do more than just one thing at a time...then again there's always mr., and mrs., bogs..ha! lol! i forgive the attack, some of these people have no sense of humour, not to mention weak offensives....point being..unless your imagination can out imagine mine don't even come to the frontline..it's futile...now it's my turn, and here i come..prepare!......oh babbit very descriptively sound and placid to the point of wood molecule vibrations, i feel you.. 8/11
regarding some deleted poem...	20-Aug-02/2:30 PM
fucking aye all the way richa! this is a tasty little treat, full of cliches, and bewildering contrasts..pleasantly forked to enrichen all of the senses to say the least...i think your approach is magnificently well rounding and you sir deserve to be voted for on and in....9/10...thank you the pleasure was all minei
regarding some deleted poem...	20-Aug-02/2:42 PM
this is a paleontoligists wet dream. a true hybrid theme racinc along the salt flats...you my friend are poised to be swept away by your own genuine brilliance 10/10
Re: Secret, Admirer by <~>	20-Aug-02/3:49 PM
yes mojo, i totally agree with you on this one(i justy couldn't put my finger quite on it yet).z..i was waiting to ride the coat tails of someone elses comment into this evaluating this work of yours, cuz i couldn't figure out why i didn't quite get it, i mean it's cool to send the small minded to the dictionary over and over again, but you had me sprawling with your choice of huge cryptic words, and i know that razor grin is a very educated and well read young lady, and she uses the same sort of itinerary (she liked your use og fecund) in her methods of explaining her own writings (i love both of your guys stuff passionately honestly i do), but it is almost overwrought with power words and phrases and structured shape, it moves like an undiscovered deep sea creature, and that can be both good and bad...i'm waiting to vote on it until i piece it all together in a way that works for my need to see where it's been and where it's going, don't get me wrong, i'm still waiting to vote on it until i feel comfortable with it...you are a hell of a writer, and i have alot of respect for your poetry, cuz it demands it. few do..i will read it until i feel it..and then i'll vote..god bless the fecundity of restless desires in us all..s
regarding some deleted poem...	20-Aug-02/8:18 PM
hah. i now you, your the god mother of my son.....would you believe somebody called me a child abuser the other day...when i lived strung out and wretched you nursed be back to health!...yes i know you!, and i know this poem i have an earlier version on my computer, glad to see you've arrived.it's a splendid piece to say the least.here let me give you the heads up, z..is good, da's great, nentwined super, babbits awfully brilliant, razorgrin,richa, and there's about twenty others the rest are like wading through a minnesota pig trough in january, i'm hitting a show on santamonica and vine i'll catch you later...oh doylum is hilarious and venus is real simmialiar to your stuff(earliar in your writing adventures reminds me of you about five years ago...love you, sorry about my b-day ramblings wish you could of made it your leo brother (little) jeremi. p.s.s have fun here it's a blast, oh yeah bachus is me when i'm pissed and loaded....so have a laugh on his shite too...ta p.sana