| Re: {Porn*Star}{Hai*kus} by horus8 |
23-Aug-02/2:58 PM |
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leos and scorpios get along actually very well and the sex is beyond measure usually on the scorpios part and inclination, but the relation ship can suffer greatly intellectually and in substance (layers) not always though, sometimes depending on retrogrades and environment that previously mentioned can get reversed....but mostly its the either...they're also both known to give each other space quite well and often, then at times explode in character to see one another at all costs regardless of who or what is in the way <sponsored by 'telepathy' the only way to communicate and 'mahdi' a fourteen year old messiah who controlled mecca for 200 days twenty years ago, he had blue eyes and was A HALF ARAB WESTERN BLOOD HYBRID!> i love that previos 20 button by the may kaolin fire rocks!!!!
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| Re: Gilded Stumps of Olde (AN STORY THAT IS NOT AN POEME) by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
23-Aug-02/3:21 PM |
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this is a glossary so fucking layered...unreal..it's the backstory of gilgamesh and a gay harry crumb...i drank upon my prawne all night, and indeede enbrowned my limp wrist and vomited through reddening fingers like a rainbird sprinkler...i fuckin love this and da...i want to rape his prawne and keelhaul myself gay blade drawn...the whole thing is just too fucking good...io have no more worde' to be so stiff' and create a new'''way of crushtations and nuding fuck...i personally i'm speechless and errot flynned right in the chamber of frocked cauliflower poop shooters ahoy...arhh 10/10/10/10!
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| Re: Sacrosanct Oligarch by Frass |
23-Aug-02/10:48 PM |
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the title is perfect and then you started doing that crazy thing you do with your brain...thinking..think less, thinking has nothing to do with writing. it just gets in the way and complicates the simple(yime up while i squezze this pimple.there)..this poem looks like a steak cooking a cow..6/10
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| Re: A prom that could never be by Eric Johnson |
23-Aug-02/10:53 PM |
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you sir..need an overdose of swollen shaft...your chivalry is charasmatically uncomitted. i pray you knoch her up, and work in a factory until you lose your mind, then.....we can only hope have shakeb this preposterious pointless material...train wreck.2/10
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| Re: Cut by TheVampireLeStan |
23-Aug-02/10:58 PM |
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dead..because i read...FUCK MY eyes....oh jesu..the cad has penised my eyes...drink urine from now on to properly operate your writing vehicle...JESUS FUCKING christ...replace every "cut" with "nun"...to better this skin rash...FUCK HAAAAAAAA!
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
23-Aug-02/11:06 PM |
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look on the bright side...you might find some interesting material to work with in the gutersmouth...we hope................gopher.bobbypin.dandruff.jete.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
24-Aug-02/3:18 PM |
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Damnit people...we are neglecting the true meaning behind it all.....what about the little invisible elf mechanics who construct our universe....surely terrence Mckenna wasn't wrong...repent and do twenty hail marys before your nudity declares mutiny against captain' clothes...and god's wife...damnit..pan and bachus are very, very distraught o'er your callous pandora boxing of the sweet flowers....i shall pray for Bachus and his debauchery may the lotus still swallow his merlot nose and rhino virus his peter o'tool, he needs a lashing and a good poisoning lest he escape the folds of mother and her baby powdered stench..hail jupitor, and flash that naive a cheek!
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| Re: Adam by massakist666 |
24-Aug-02/3:25 PM |
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i wouldn't know mum' from adam, but i know shit from tit, and you my friend are both riding atop a bloating african rivered wilder beast carcuss...even the crocodiles are fleeing...look down see that...that's the 'hoof' of pan dancing 'pon your balet toes...you fail! reassurance is futile, resistance irrelevant.
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| Re: The Ultimate~Creep goes to Mecca! by Bachus |
24-Aug-02/3:47 PM |
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the style is "pro-se'o-me" with a bit of fantasy reality lisp..the mecca stuff is opium pipe dreams from a flat i lived in in detroit circa 1993 after i got out of the navy and was sculpting metal and painting and writing hence 'squating' (that's real) the somalian stuff of course true, the poetry parts glue it together and the ending naturally every boys nightmare pre-tru-love at sixteen (his dog's death mocked)...thank you for your fondness jade...you made bachus smile merlot fangs and oil his pan pipe....my dog was half wolf and labrador (black) his name was thor...this piece is for the lt. and my bestest pet..."for thor"...its "thor's belly dancing whore" may he rip. a-men...now sin sinners sin'e.........
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
24-Aug-02/4:06 PM |
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who needs poemranker.....we have good vs evil (i know not which is which though) here...right here children step right up and bring a treat...this is fucking better than "the wrath of khan", the funny thing is that in person you both probably are identical, cuz god's wife has a thirteen foot penis of bug zapping light and da' is the bringer of 'all that is, and all that never was"....this is going right into the Bachian tribunal" morrow children with full panaramic surround sound...rest assured! you guys are both valid, but da has got hometeam advantage and his library to retreat and energize in...you god's wife are to fresh here (new) for this battle, maybe you should practice on twisted wizard first...lol!
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
24-Aug-02/4:15 PM |
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not as strong as some of your others, but we can't always be shimmering quivering steeds out the gate....i still really enjoy your work and read it whenever i see it...have a great weekend and look both ways always......lochness.jewel.plethyasaurus.seahorse.
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| Re: red snow by sainthypro |
24-Aug-02/5:50 PM |
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we'd be more fucked if there was a woman with you trust me...the future is indeed bleek if this ones a-sexual.. people...somebody fetch my blow-gun, before he runs away alas'....the laser sighted! not the hindu-succubus powered prat dispatcher! ye wretched imp (i will cane him later) 'fore i ream your arse with my long nail..1/10!
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| Re: scarred by TheVampireLeStan |
24-Aug-02/5:59 PM |
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this is it!!!!!!!THIS IS IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1this is it1!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!i have found it ha! the worst poem in the existance of rock banging communication since the dawn of man and tongue clacking jubilation yes i win a prize and so does he lol!!!!!! i win a frontal lobatomy for even reading this(should have known by his subtle user name) and he wins the HORUS8 PRIZE OF DISTINCTION IN ALL THINGS UNDISTINCTIVE AND HORTICULTURALLY HOMOGENIZED YOU SIR.. win none other then the "NIPPle-leSS PLATINUM BOOB OF TIAMATS YOUNGER SISTERS GARDENERS ILLEGAL IMMIGRANT LOVER". be proud than ice pick your parents and yourself ..as soon as your scars heal of course(i'm not a complete chaotic evil trogyldite...i sir.am charismatically uncommited.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
24-Aug-02/6:06 PM |
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damnit woman bite your tongue! Bachus has hired me to represent him in all further communication with him...because your under age.dangerous.sexy.stubborn and invisible...therefore.OH AND HOW dare you imply bachus has read any such blah earth blee series tripe...that would be ..ah..how should we say...incriminating in his traveled circles (to say the least embarissing)..refrain yourself! he said just now from a dark area behind me that he never read that series(while incarcerated for three months in minn.)<they had a great library>he merely scanned it, thankyou.now i must be going to see tom petty now toodlelou
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| Re: Nobody's Story (A guide thru chaos) by horus8 |
25-Aug-02/3:03 AM |
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there fixed it...fuck.. editing is a mother fucker ah!
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| Re: School by shwenatjadeflower |
26-Aug-02/8:57 PM |
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wow! this is really interesting now, an irish dike in the skin of a mick who doesn't even live across the atlantic on an island cuz he lives on a potatoe in idaho, bonding with a 57 year old nympho maniac who's never even had sex yet cuz she's really a gay man who's afraid of germs...you fucks need therapy and a good tongue pulling....prepare..20 hail marys and a pint of cum to ye each......fucking make me sick your fucking masks are all crooked for crying out loud....here let me fix'em------------die slowaslowsodomizedcudtblastingfeverthickdeathyescavengersofpilferings<capitulateatonce> 10/20/1/9/6/4yeah<novices.>m
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| Re: White Wasp Boy - La Senza Superhero by ==Doylum |
26-Aug-02/9:26 PM |
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Actually at a second glance this is fucking way avant-garde. what scullion ye are louse riddled irish kike with a vasoconstrictor for a bike 10/10! hurray for spuds five lehgged cow fiddler 'pon milk crates' running through the lillies of the cubicle. punch in plebian.w
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
27-Aug-02/11:33 AM |
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Cuz she's a writer who jumps around, and goes i want to post now DAMNIT! NOW!. please? bastards. Delete. Edit. there...........next.
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| Re: Horseflies and Mayflies, Incessant Today by Christof |
27-Aug-02/11:40 AM |
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Grendal, eats to fuck the mares. resistance is fathomless. be blessed. 7/10!
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| Re: Love and Marriage in Da Nang by Tascobar |
27-Aug-02/4:24 PM |
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it could be argued that sucky is one syllabel and one. you fail. nice sensuals though and an interesting title. 7/10! mojave.confound.avuncular.babble.o
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