red snow

Member since 2002 · Posted 12 Jul 2002 · 2 comments

Tonight tonight alone in a mist a secret but I can tell this Alone alone noone around cause yesterday the red snow came down Dreaming, scheming now i'm screaming noone to settle my nerves dreaming scheming i'm still screaming the snow is all around We had hoped for peace one day when nations walked hand in hand but now on this god forsaken land I am the only living man

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[8] Sigh'ense... 31-Jul-02/9:21 AM Reply

oooohh, deep indeed. Could probably do without the second "dreaming, scheming" in stanza2. or not? Da1 said it.

[1] horus8 24-Aug-02/5:50 PM Reply

we'd be more fucked if there was a woman with you trust me...the future is indeed bleek if this ones a-sexual.. people...somebody fetch my blow-gun, before he runs away alas'....the laser sighted! not the hindu-succubus powered prat dispatcher! ye wretched imp (i will cane him later) 'fore i ream your arse with my long nail..1/10!