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red snow (Free verse) by sainthypro

Tonight tonight alone in a mist a secret but I can tell this Alone alone noone around cause yesterday the red snow came down Dreaming, scheming now i'm screaming noone to settle my nerves dreaming scheming i'm still screaming the snow is all around We had hoped for peace one day when nations walked hand in hand but now on this god forsaken land I am the only living man

Sigh'ense... 31-Jul-02/9:21 AM
oooohh, deep indeed. Could probably do without the second "dreaming, scheming" in stanza2. or not? Da1 said it.




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