on Pedophile by Lenore
29 Aug 2002, 11:09 AM
As fast as kevin spacey. 7/10!0
on some deleted poem
28 Aug 2002, 1:03 PM
A fastidious bunch did hunch for lunch, but hah...how the back broke with patience, here is my offal. choke. 6/10. predictable from the first word. quick and resolves. titilate? it doesn't.
on "The title is overused!" by vulcan
30 Aug 2002, 12:26 AM
is nothing. you okay. maybe. okay.
on some deleted poem
29 Aug 2002, 11:03 AM
factoid thyroid meta beta! 7/10.
on 'The Grey' Triplet by Shin-Bojangles
28 Aug 2002, 3:15 PM
"The Red" Fiblet (haiku) by chok-denegroes............../What's this ? No more beard!/Gandalf, naked and scorched red!/Sound the elf alarm!/BONG! "Wont you just die ? /Soon! For the love of troll cock!/Gandalf, is a waste./ Yayyee! Gandalf is red!/Sauron's shaft throbs with delight!/ Iron maiden blasts loud!/u
on some deleted poem
29 Aug 2002, 11:01 AM
eye-opener! 8/10, might be a mispell in stanza 4, 3 line, 1 word. see.ya!r
on Award shows make my cock hard, but you don't by Bachus
29 Aug 2002, 11:19 PM
indeed. detroit duo. siblings. sexy drummer. aggression and classy guitar antics. yet humble....
on A Hard Lesson Learned by kristenk69lover
29 Aug 2002, 11:23 PM
god.......i've cum. sorry. see you tomorrow.
on "The title is overused!" by vulcan
30 Aug 2002, 12:45 AM
not the poem freak. you. how r u feeling? that's all! jesus...be polite and every gets defensive.
on Waiting For You To Call (vulgar language) by PK
29 Aug 2002, 9:49 PM
d.a's got a point i say replace the word "that" with cunt, the term "I" with "the shank of maggotry" and the with "fish monger". great. thanks. may a rock from outer space fix your problems. and mine too. soon
on Anna N. Smiths vagina monologue in Evangelistic tongues by horus8
29 Aug 2002, 6:58 PM
have i told you yet of the adventures of vagina, the three legged pigeon? he belongs the the "lip flock" in the great tale of the three lipped vagina (pigeon, not a good roller) cast out for his atrocious third legg hanging, mocking, dead staring, he shit in the church pews and alsp worked well in puter.)
on some deleted poem
29 Aug 2002, 2:49 PM
hey, it's your bros....i have to consolidate my credit cards soon, call me .i need help!....fucking providian jacked me good quick...going down...thanks, love jeremi.
on Incidentally, you might want to look up 'Amplexus' by Shin-Bojangles
29 Aug 2002, 11:15 AM
mighty blasphemous! boss tone groan. i there any body out there? 8/10!
on some deleted poem
29 Aug 2002, 11:42 AM
i enjoyed it until the lost stanza then i loved it ugly, too many birds? 7/10. haughty imagery from the gate though.h
on some deleted poem
28 Aug 2002, 11:37 PM
you too huh. bummer.i actually liked it though. so, i give you permission to beat me now to.. fist me. baby!, what happened to whitejones? was it. the bugger, he vanished heh. bummer.try the soup yet? it's good stuff. you'll like much. moving on. later 7/10!
on How my head feels by Adriaan
28 Aug 2002, 11:41 PM
you suck. sorry. my femur's bigger than yours, and my plaster of paris is from paris. nah....(tongue out lol!) vibrate.dagger.iree.hemp. 4
on some deleted poem
28 Aug 2002, 3:44 PM
i'm in retrograde this week sorry bugger...here allow me to readjust my tits ahhhhhhhhhh......i meant the opposite magnified scrotismaly to the 3rd power.....vulnerably titilating wishy-washy woeful "let's all have fun with it artistic withdrawl"? the title should be "my caret" at least you would have that going for you from the gate before you get all fancy smancy with your "having fun style" wait that buggering was 22 years ago ....no cock phantom carouses for that long i hope... i pray....he must of left a carbuncle, or two....should we worry..laser surgery...strait walk no limp....get the gimp!
on Love and Marriage in Da Nang by Tascobar
27 Aug 2002, 4:31 PM
peter porcupine is a bored house wife with a cock and balls midrift stare. he's a cad and a deep throat who wets his bed out of self respect and chivalry. that's why i respect his opinion like floored toast. bon appetite piker. look down! see that? that's my 'hoof' mocking at you. don't make me fill you full of kale. you couldn't handle the flavorless calcium blast. you are a muted clank.missed.s
on Waiting to understand by Cha no Onna
29 Aug 2002, 12:19 AM
you're fired.cuz i love you.s
on "The title is overused!" by vulcan
29 Aug 2002, 11:22 AM
horus8 FANTASIMAL ORGASIM IN THE NAME OF ALL THAT'S BACCHIAN AND TITILATING award for poetry. throw banannas at it until the monkey head snaps. i snapped. the g-sting. dollar bills flew around like canon fodder.9/10I