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Adam (Free verse) by massakist666 Theres this boy i know called Adam,
His mum said she shouldn't have had him,
He's got hair on his head,
Thats as black as the dead,
And his mum and dad are both blonde!
Up the ladder:
Daisies
Down the ladder:
mystery
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Posted: August 24, 2002 7:13 AM PDT; Last modified: August 24, 2002 7:13 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.3276463 Overall Rank: 13096 Comments:
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Ming T. Merciless @ 62.254.0.7
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24-Aug-02/7:40 AM
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A cunning twist!!! You have marks for effort, unfortunately the content leaves a little to be desired and should probably have remained in the playground.
i wouldn't know mum' from adam, but i know shit from tit, and you my friend are both riding atop a bloating african rivered wilder beast carcuss...even the crocodiles are fleeing...look down see that...that's the 'hoof' of pan dancing 'pon your balet toes...you fail! reassurance is futile, resistance irrelevant.
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