poemranker ::Adam by massakist666

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Free verse № 11110

Adam

Member since 2002 · Posted 24 Aug 2002 · 2 comments

Theres this boy i know called Adam, His mum said she shouldn't have had him, He's got hair on his head, Thats as black as the dead, And his mum and dad are both blonde!

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[2] Ming T. Merciless 24-Aug-02/7:40 AM Reply
A cunning twist!!! You have marks for effort, unfortunately the content leaves a little to be desired and should probably have remained in the playground.
[5] horus8 24-Aug-02/3:25 PM Reply
i wouldn't know mum' from adam, but i know shit from tit, and you my friend are both riding atop a bloating african rivered wilder beast carcuss...even the crocodiles are fleeing...look down see that...that's the 'hoof' of pan dancing 'pon your balet toes...you fail! reassurance is futile, resistance irrelevant.