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Adam (Free verse) by massakist666

Theres this boy i know called Adam, His mum said she shouldn't have had him, He's got hair on his head, Thats as black as the dead, And his mum and dad are both blonde!

Ming T. Merciless 24-Aug-02/7:40 AM
A cunning twist!!! You have marks for effort, unfortunately the content leaves a little to be desired and should probably have remained in the playground.




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