| Re: Not God's Wife, Just a Girl by w~* ATHENA *~w |
22-Nov-02/3:41 AM |
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evaporating piss clouds on the move..intriguing indded.8./
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| Re: Beginning or End? by xdarkxangelx24 |
22-Nov-02/11:43 AM |
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neither. it's the figure four leg lock by greg the hammer valentine.
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| Re: Damn you, Mary Poppins... by Yardbird |
22-Nov-02/11:47 AM |
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' calig ' ? choice pull aim set FIRE 6. because i hated the movie then and i despise it now.
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22-Nov-02/4:55 PM |
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a suicide love poem complete with the moon and menstruation and masturbation. i'm impressed.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
22-Nov-02/4:57 PM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
22-Nov-02/5:04 PM |
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the double grace at the end doesn't work. anything ese would work...waist. face. taste..needs.call..9.
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| Re: Forgotten by T'ien |
23-Nov-02/7:52 PM |
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why not bark and or park.
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| Re: suicide lost the plot by T'ien |
23-Nov-02/7:54 PM |
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very mischevious, but your spelling is shit, i'm sure you've heard that before though huh?
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| Re: What's the Point of Love? by loneshadow29 |
25-Nov-02/2:45 PM |
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you should be asking yourself is a virus really living or just pretending to.???
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
25-Nov-02/2:52 PM |
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trippy. a fine narrative. well done. now, over the wall with you.e
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25-Nov-02/3:04 PM |
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mr. stallone read this and wept. vin deisel read it and smiled ironic (not that he got it, he just does that so he doesn't have to open his mouth) i read it and drew the line between our obsession with muscles and idiots with one liners "you are one ugly mother fucker" not you...that's just my favorite...lets all take a moment to remember..hanz and franz are truly fucked now. 8.
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25-Nov-02/10:09 PM |
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if you weren't such a fucking idiot i could find it in my heart to see the humor in this piece, but unfortunately you are, and therefore i wont ..your constant chinese water tortured attempt at satirizing hip hop shit music and artists only than to try and somehow catergorize 'other certain peoples work' with this kind of psuedo pop psycology you have going on in your paranoid skull muscle only proves my point, being that it's a horrible sign of the time when the 'so called "voted in"' best poet on this site has to turn around and stoop to this kind of worm shit level of thinking and projection?!....even with cookies to trade you wouldn't last two seconds in a big city's county jail. unless you consider suburban halfway houses some sort of test of manhood? you should stick to your beers and loveloss contemplation it works leagues better for you, and i'm sorry to say that your depiction of street reality is painfully bias and inaccurate...not to mention tainted by your own inability to gain any real credibility in life or art, and razorgrin was right when she said your sense of humor is your greatest flaw, but hey! you write real swell poetry, and you got that going for you.f
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26-Nov-02/1:09 PM |
"Between carriages and creamsicles" raises a splendid image, your firststanza is weak, and of course junipers and scary things takes a huge bite out of crime. last stanza's mediocre compared...placate? that's funny. you're funny mr.foster. i'm not.
try www.spaceshuttleguest.com. enjoy your 7.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
26-Nov-02/1:13 PM |
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doug soderstrom would really like this poem. here let me e-mail it to him. 6.t
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| Re: ode to horus by daniella |
27-Nov-02/12:22 AM |
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i do not. mind you. the thing is. i was an idiot to give them the weapons to destroy me with, but i'm a sucker for people with great minds and talent. if they want to low ball me with something as trite as biceps and haircuts, of course i'm going to be pissed. i happen to be more committed to what i've achieved without brawn, to what i've achieved with it...i can't help it if this world revolves around britney's tits, and not her jewish song writer's mind. i'm working against that too, and i don't enjoy being condemned for it, nor does my best friend and co-songwriter.
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| Re: my soul i give by roxy |
27-Nov-02/7:38 PM |
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no, STOP!...here's your blow dryer back...don't do it. try a nive relaxing bath while you dry your hair.n
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| Re: It's All 'Cause I Love You by Tigger8023 |
27-Nov-02/7:40 PM |
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| Re: Exhaustion by vulcan |
27-Nov-02/8:37 PM |
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like a bullit. concubines are groovy. here's a 9. the title works well off of te statement, as it should.
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| Re: Falling in Love With a Player by Tigger8023 |
27-Nov-02/9:11 PM |
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honestly...you have a knack for this sort of thing.7.
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| Re: The Poem To End All Poems by Zubster |
27-Nov-02/9:21 PM |
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the only fucking magical combo here is how you were able to convince two of your under the sheets dutch oven buddies into voting a 10 and an eight on this. now that zubs is a magical combo, but not deviled eggs and cold duck. DUCK! 0.
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