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~* ATHENA *~ is a recipient of the poemWanker award: for appropriating other writers' work and otherwise plagiarising. Read with caution! This poem has been flagged as plagiarised.
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Posted: November 21, 2002 10:59 PM PST; Last modified: November 22, 2002 10:59 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.0 Overall Rank: N/A Comments:
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horus8 @ 24.126.113.154
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22-Nov-02/3:41 AM
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evaporating piss clouds on the move..intriguing indded.8./
Loved the last stanza, how can this be criticized i wonder?
like the way you start off innocent, and then throw in the etherised patient. insidious.
Regarding "ehterised"--if she's going to rip off someone else's shit--especially someone as well known as T.S. Eliot, and especially one of his most famous poems, for chrissakes--you'd think she'd be able to at least spell everything correctly. I'm surprised she took the time to retype it--she could have just cut and pasted it from Bartleby.com.
she got me. no wonder it sounded so familiar. geez.
WTF? Are you guys kidding--two "8" votes? Fuck--doesn't anyone read Eliot--or are you being sardonic?
ATHENA--last time you ripped off this T.S. Eliot poem (Guitar and Drum solo), adding some lame final lines of your own, I thought maybe you were making some kind of statement (no clue what it might be, mind you, but gave you the benefit of the doubt). What are you doing here, exactly, besides plagiarizing Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock? Write your own shit, why don't you? 0 view(s)
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