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~* ATHENA *~ is a recipient of the poemWanker award:
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Free verse № 26352

Not God's Wife, Just a Girl

by w~* ATHENA *~w

Member since 2002 · Posted 21 Nov 2002 · Edited 22 Nov 2002 · 6 comments

This poem has been flagged as plagiarised.

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[8] horus8 22-Nov-02/3:41 AM Reply

evaporating piss clouds on the move..intriguing indded.8./

[8] Caducus 22-Nov-02/4:43 AM Reply

Loved the last stanza, how can this be criticized i wonder?

[0] <~> 22-Nov-02/7:22 AM Reply

like the way you start off innocent, and then throw in the etherised patient. insidious.

[n/a] ecargo › <~> 22-Nov-02/8:06 AM Reply

Regarding "ehterised"--if she's going to rip off someone else's shit--especially someone as well known as T.S. Eliot, and especially one of his most famous poems, for chrissakes--you'd think she'd be able to at least spell everything correctly. I'm surprised she took the time to retype it--she could have just cut and pasted it from Bartleby.com.

[0] <~> › ecargo 22-Nov-02/8:10 AM Reply

she got me. no wonder it sounded so familiar. geez.

[n/a] ecargo 22-Nov-02/7:51 AM Reply

WTF? Are you guys kidding--two "8" votes? Fuck--doesn't anyone read Eliot--or are you being sardonic?

ATHENA--last time you ripped off this T.S. Eliot poem (Guitar and Drum solo), adding some lame final lines of your own, I thought maybe you were making some kind of statement (no clue what it might be, mind you, but gave you the benefit of the doubt). What are you doing here, exactly, besides plagiarizing Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock? Write your own shit, why don't you?