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Falling in Love With a Player (Free verse) by Tigger8023
I fell in love with you and then you broke my heart, I knew never to love a player, I was wrong from the start... Loving you was like ripping out my heart. I refused to look around me and see all the terrible things you were doing to me, I was in my own world and I didn't see all the trouble you were, I was deeply in love. Now that's all ruined, you see, All because you played me, You had looks, you had charm, You were slick with your words, You knew just what to say. I was foolish to think we were made for each other, I always prayed you would never love another, I wanted us to always be with each other. Loving a player is one of the hardest things ever, I have learned a lot from my experiences with you, My heart was broken into two. I know now, as I look back on my past, Dating a player will never last, So, in my future I'll watch what I do, I won't date anymore players, But I'll still always love you.

Up the ladder: I Am Here Waiting
Down the ladder: Fallen

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.75
Weighted score: 4.8509965
Overall Rank: 10505
Posted: November 27, 2002 6:02 AM PST; Last modified: November 27, 2002 7:25 PM PST
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[7] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 27-Nov-02/9:11 PM | Reply
honestly...you have a knack for this sort of thing.7.
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