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Fallen (Free verse) by Beaner99 Today lasts forever
Tonight never ends
With your arms around me
I can pretend
I am the girl in a swing soaring high
Not afraid to fall
Still convinced she can fly
Today last forever
Tonight never ends
With you wrapped around me
I can pretend
I am an angel in heavan
Pureness and Light
A vision of beauty
Dressed in bright white
Today last forever
Tonight never ends
With you inside me
I can pretend
I am all right
Up the ladder:
Falling in Love With a Player
Down the ladder:
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Posted: November 27, 2002 9:18 AM PST; Last modified: November 27, 2002 9:18 AM PSTWeighted score: 4.8509965 Overall Rank: 10506 Comments:
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vulcan @ 80.242.1.49
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27-Nov-02/11:27 AM
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good(of course because of the pretention!)6
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