poemranker ::Fallen by Beaner99

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Free verse № 27545

Fallen

Member since 2002 · Posted 27 Nov 2002 · 1 comment

Today lasts forever Tonight never ends With your arms around me I can pretend I am the girl in a swing soaring high Not afraid to fall Still convinced she can fly Today last forever Tonight never ends With you wrapped around me I can pretend I am an angel in heavan Pureness and Light A vision of beauty Dressed in bright white Today last forever Tonight never ends With you inside me I can pretend I am all right

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[6] vulcan 27-Nov-02/11:27 AM Reply
good(of course because of the pretention!)6