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Free verse № 28749

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Member since 2002 · Posted 5 Dec 2002 · 0 comments

As i lay down my weary head on my restfull pillow.. feeling all alone and empty..all i have to hold onto is the dreams and memories we once shared...long walks under the starlit sky...walking hand n' hand....gazing into one anothers eyes feeling all warm n' bubbly...we were suppose to be forever...til that one cold November day,it all flashed so quickly,my whole world came tumbling down,there will be no tomarrow,just the memories we shared..the only love i have only known is now gone,i have not yet grieved,i'm not ready to let you go...i close my eyes and see you there,as i reach out to touch you,you disappear

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