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untitled (Free verse) by MakenzieNy
As i lay down my weary head on my restfull pillow..
feeling all alone and empty..all i have to hold onto is the dreams and
memories we once shared...long walks under the starlit sky...walking
hand n' hand....gazing into one anothers eyes feeling all warm n' bubbly.
..we were suppose to be forever...til that one cold November day,it all
flashed so quickly,my whole world came tumbling down,there will be no
tomarrow,just the memories we shared..the only love i have only known is
now gone,i have not yet grieved,i'm not ready to let you go...i close my
eyes and see you there,as i reach out to touch you,you disappear
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.75
Weighted score: 4.8509965
Overall Rank: 10513
Posted: December 5, 2002 9:55 PM PST; Last modified: December 5, 2002 9:55 PM PST
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