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untitled (Free verse) by MakenzieNy
As i lay down my weary head on my restfull pillow.. feeling all alone and empty..all i have to hold onto is the dreams and memories we once shared...long walks under the starlit sky...walking hand n' hand....gazing into one anothers eyes feeling all warm n' bubbly. ..we were suppose to be forever...til that one cold November day,it all flashed so quickly,my whole world came tumbling down,there will be no tomarrow,just the memories we shared..the only love i have only known is now gone,i have not yet grieved,i'm not ready to let you go...i close my eyes and see you there,as i reach out to touch you,you disappear

Up the ladder: Fallen
Down the ladder: stomach

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.75
Weighted score: 4.8509965
Overall Rank: 10513
Posted: December 5, 2002 9:55 PM PST; Last modified: December 5, 2002 9:55 PM PST
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