Re: Little Green Man by BleedingRose	23-May-03/11:05 AM
how silly.
Re: new year's eve by razorgrin	23-May-03/11:06 AM
5 7 4
Re: infection of birth by T'ien	23-May-03/11:21 AM
haiku?
Re: Kentucky Fried Fun by bondjedi	23-May-03/11:25 AM
vile.
Re: Untitled by ==Doylum	23-May-03/11:25 AM
strangely sexual.
Re: a haiku for all you traditionalists, and after you're done reading it you can eat my shorts by bondjedi	23-May-03/11:26 AM
made me laugh. 8
Re: Happy Cancer! by Agemo-Z	23-May-03/11:29 AM
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regarding some deleted poem...	29-May-03/5:06 AM
excellent job.
Re: Anouk by daniella	29-May-03/10:27 AM
I think this is lovely, save the "bubble rising at birth" being a troubling image of some odd body function. It takes the reader in the wrong direction early on.
Re: Knife by Alyssa91	29-May-03/10:30 AM
what is a medician? Otherwise I liked it. somewhat sexual, somewhat angst-ridden.
Re: Suicide by Alyssa91	29-May-03/10:33 AM
buried. careful with the spelling... If you are thinking of suicide, don't do it. I hope that you are mature enough to know that life will get better--pain dulls with time. as for the poem, some of the rhymes seemed forced, interrupting the flow.
Re: Shut the fuck up and fix me a Scoobie snack. by Bachus	29-May-03/10:35 AM
overused the """"""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""marks. cute concept!
Re: the love by sooz	29-May-03/10:37 AM
awww.. pitter patter. like little feet. AAAAH!
Re: Walter Cronkite by UnityMitford	29-May-03/10:39 AM
i like a good mlt. mutton lettuce and tomato sandwich...
Re: Haiku Gymraeg by Nicholas Jones	29-May-03/10:40 AM
oo ee oo aa aa bing bang walla walla ding dang.
Re: While cleaning the aviary by Jeremi B. Handrinos	29-May-03/10:42 AM
is it aviary? or avery? I'll have to look that up. great poem!
Re: The Autopsy (as shown on Channel Four) by Nicholas Jones	29-May-03/10:43 AM
troubling.
regarding some deleted poem...	29-May-03/10:45 AM
2nd line 6 syllables. maybe "eyeball" instead of "face".
Re: Stuck in the Past... by loneshadow29	29-May-03/10:47 AM
zero.
Re: A Perfectly Reasonable Question by baughworm	9-Jun-03/12:27 PM
his knobby hands riding your hips? I'm confused by this image, like a coin operated horse at the supermarket? that implies a climbing on, straddling motion, which confuses me, wouldn't the woman be straddling? Not the man's hands... I'm confused. I like the poem, but I am confused.