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Knife (Free verse) by Alyssa91
Knife That knife you have Cuts so deep But I didn't know it Would cut me I was nieve when I believed you When you said You would never leave You lied to me When I asked Do you love me The knife was rusted When I touched it The cut grew infected When you tried to heal it I grow weak As you grow strong Its the way you wanted It to be When I try to heal You come back again Your always looking For a medician ease your mind You shed my blood To clear your mind And when your done You leave me Bleeding on the ground And you stop coming around

Down the ladder: ILLusion in Falsity

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.119203
Overall Rank: 5857
Posted: May 29, 2003 6:53 AM PDT; Last modified: May 29, 2003 6:53 AM PDT
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[9] Robert K Foster @ 209.68.70.205 | 29-May-03/10:30 AM | Reply
what is a medician?
Otherwise I liked it. somewhat sexual, somewhat angst-ridden.
[n/a] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 | 29-May-03/10:47 AM | Reply
YOU were nieve?
[n/a] deleted user @ 63.237.171.19 > <~> | 29-May-03/2:08 PM | Reply
nieve - spanish for "ice cream"
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