Re: Angelic Triumvirate by Sterling5583	19-Jul-02/2:46 PM
how very enduring and sweet... I feel for you, but I am also going down the same path, and my parents don't seem to understand... keep it up...
Re: Crossspecies Blues by ==Doylum	18-Jul-02/6:55 PM
only cause of rhyme... work on actually doing something with your time...
Re: Bloody cow by ==Doylum	18-Jul-02/6:53 PM
it's only getting this cause it rhymes so well... try spelling better...
Re: The beggar in me by dilips_10	9-Jul-02/3:38 PM
interesting concept... once wrote a poem based on a very similiar idea... good job...
Re: Garden by ifni	9-Jul-02/3:29 PM
cute and silly... not bad... although I don't know what virii are?? *smile*
Re: tears beyond hope by Mystifying	9-Jul-02/3:28 PM
pretty good storyline, and wording... work on spelling though please... keep trying though...
Re: The Pain by silver	9-Jul-02/3:22 PM
hmmm... intriguing... hope you make it...
Re: Let me let me go by Eric Johnson	9-Jul-02/3:21 PM
sad and moving... is very good though... hope you can find a true friend...
Re: To Mother by lynnstratton	9-Jul-02/3:16 PM
awww.... how sweet and sad... very good poem though... I'm sorry about your mother...
Re: Take Me Away When You're Gone by Twisted Wizard	9-Jul-02/3:12 PM
sad but pretty good... more meaningful and emotional so to speak... *smile*
Re: Unknown Plains by Twisted Wizard	9-Jul-02/3:06 PM
ok, let's just say I never want to go to this place, but you did try, and I'd say you did a good job with wording... *smile* but you still may want to read some more poetry before you write...
Re: Reflection Upon Looking in Roget's Thesaurus, Copyright 1941 by Syr Charles	7-Jul-02/12:42 PM
I guess I could agree... I've dealt I believe with the same type of situation... EF
Re: White Lie by ErgoErgun	7-Jul-02/12:39 PM
hmmm... and where did this idea come from?? just curious... EF
Re: Jericho by goldfish	7-Jul-02/12:38 PM
Very intriguing... it almost seems like it's possibly based on the bible... although if I'm wrong let me know... *smile* EF