on Angelic Triumvirate by Sterling5583
19 Jul 2002, 2:46 PM
how very enduring and sweet... I feel for you, but I am also going down the same path, and my parents don't seem to understand... keep it up...
on Crossspecies Blues by ==Doylum
18 Jul 2002, 6:55 PM
only cause of rhyme... work on actually doing something with your time...
on Bloody cow by ==Doylum
18 Jul 2002, 6:53 PM
it's only getting this cause it rhymes so well... try spelling better...
on The beggar in me by dilips_10
9 Jul 2002, 3:38 PM
interesting concept... once wrote a poem based on a very similiar idea... good job...
on tears beyond hope by Mystifying
9 Jul 2002, 3:28 PM
pretty good storyline, and wording... work on spelling though please... keep trying though...
on Let me let me go by Eric Johnson
9 Jul 2002, 3:21 PM
sad and moving... is very good though... hope you can find a true friend...
on To Mother by lynnstratton
9 Jul 2002, 3:16 PM
awww.... how sweet and sad... very good poem though... I'm sorry about your mother...
on Take Me Away When You're Gone by Twisted Wizard
9 Jul 2002, 3:12 PM
sad but pretty good... more meaningful and emotional so to speak... *smile*
on Unknown Plains by Twisted Wizard
9 Jul 2002, 3:06 PM
ok, let's just say I never want to go to this place, but you did try,
and I'd say you did a good job with wording... *smile* but you
still may want to read some more poetry before you write...
and I'd say you did a good job with wording... *smile* but you
still may want to read some more poetry before you write...
on Reflection Upon Looking in Roget's Thesaurus, Copyright 1941 by Syr Charles
7 Jul 2002, 12:42 PM
I guess I could agree... I've dealt I believe with the same type of situation... EF