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19-Jul-02/3:50 PM |
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19-Jul-02/3:52 PM |
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um, work on the rhyming...
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| Re: Midnight at the pool by flatliner |
19-Jul-02/3:53 PM |
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hmmm... good idea, work on spelling...
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| Re: To Be Rich by Bakar |
19-Jul-02/3:56 PM |
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cute and interesting idea...
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| Re: Through the eyes of life by Angel_of_fait |
19-Jul-02/4:12 PM |
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nice, but work on the spelling...
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| Re: Heartsong by RobinGayle |
19-Jul-02/4:18 PM |
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intriguing, and probably true...
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19-Jul-02/4:36 PM |
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weird, but some interesting ideas...
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| Re: In Vein by nentwined |
19-Jul-02/4:37 PM |
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19-Jul-02/4:41 PM |
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| Re: Valentine by mikeyh53581 |
19-Jul-02/4:42 PM |
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good idea, and you did a pretty good job of putting the question into poetry...
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19-Jul-02/4:53 PM |
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very good imagery... yes do try to get it published.. any more up your sleeve??
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19-Jul-02/5:10 PM |
interesting, and if it helps keep you from committing suicide then by
all means continue... :-P
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| Re: Dear Dad by liquidlama |
19-Jul-02/5:23 PM |
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good idea and use of language.. try and keep it skinnier... :-)
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19-Jul-02/6:24 PM |
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glad you found that special someone....
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| Re: trapoide by Angel_of_fait |
19-Jul-02/6:26 PM |
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hmmm... I just don't know...
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| Re: A poem from the sky by Roisin |
19-Jul-02/6:28 PM |
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life, love, poetry... it just works...
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| Re: just like the jagged dagger by Angel_of_fait |
19-Jul-02/6:30 PM |
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good ideas and descriptions.. work on spelling and grammar...
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| Re: Waiting to understand by Cha no Onna |
19-Jul-02/6:32 PM |
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I know it sucks, doesn't it??
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19-Jul-02/6:43 PM |
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| Re: Waiting for things to Happen by nentwined |
19-Jul-02/6:49 PM |
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