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Midnight at the pool (Free verse) by flatliner
We make rhythm our own song
in us, it takes us along
daring us to not feel the strain
together we have much to gain.
sparks of emotion rule our dance
feeling everything, leaving it all to chance
we bask in the bright light of our heat
searing all who dare to follow our beat.
our music flashes are skins vibrate
we are gluttons with a full plate
tasting all that lifes feast will give
nourished, well fed we dance to live.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.1666665
Weighted score: 5.0448236
Overall Rank: 6969
Posted: July 19, 2002 8:36 AM PDT; Last modified: July 19, 2002 8:36 AM PDT
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