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Midnight at the pool (Free verse) by flatliner
We make rhythm our own song in us, it takes us along daring us to not feel the strain together we have much to gain. sparks of emotion rule our dance feeling everything, leaving it all to chance we bask in the bright light of our heat searing all who dare to follow our beat. our music flashes are skins vibrate we are gluttons with a full plate tasting all that lifes feast will give nourished, well fed we dance to live.

Up the ladder: Good Bye
Down the ladder: Relizing Death

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.1666665
Weighted score: 5.0448236
Overall Rank: 6969
Posted: July 19, 2002 8:36 AM PDT; Last modified: July 19, 2002 8:36 AM PDT
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[4] forestchild7 @ 216.77.216.8 | 19-Jul-02/3:53 PM | Reply
hmmm... good idea, work on spelling...
[7] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 | 27-Aug-02/1:27 PM | Reply
i love that dance! dance often, my friend!
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