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Relizing Death (Free verse) by SoulSlippedAway
She's discovered this truth that beckons
Never wanting to believe it before
Now realizing she's not breathing
Her body falls to the floor
She wakes up to nothing but black
But a mirror stands in her way
She looks at her hurt reflection
And sees her soul float away
Instead of screaming her voice is caught
She panics in threatening light
The girl runs and goes hide
She can't even stand her own sight
This can't be happening she thinks
And trys to make herself bleed
Confusing virtues get in her way
No blood drips for her to succeed
Now she sees what she used to have
She can't go back ever now
she closes her eyes and sleeps
Wishing she could cry somehow
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.1666665
Weighted score: 5.0448236
Overall Rank: 6970
Posted: July 22, 2002 12:31 PM PDT; Last modified: July 22, 2002 12:31 PM PDT
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