poemranker ::The Message by venusdemilo

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Free verse № 5852

The Message

Member since 2002 · Posted 23 Jul 2002 · 0 comments

The night we said goodbye I thought I heard you cry The memories we had Shall always leave me sad Through laughter and through tears We've spent so many years You were my heart, my one true love But a message from above Tells me I must go And leave you on your own Every once in a while I'll check in But lovers we'll never be again

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