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The Message (Free verse) by venusdemilo
The night we said goodbye I thought I heard you cry The memories we had Shall always leave me sad Through laughter and through tears We've spent so many years You were my heart, my one true love But a message from above Tells me I must go And leave you on your own Every once in a while I'll check in But lovers we'll never be again

Up the ladder: Relizing Death
Down the ladder: love: siamese verse 1

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.1666665
Weighted score: 5.0448236
Overall Rank: 6968
Posted: July 23, 2002 3:54 PM PDT; Last modified: July 23, 2002 3:54 PM PDT
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