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Midnight at the pool (Free verse) by flatliner

We make rhythm our own song in us, it takes us along daring us to not feel the strain together we have much to gain. sparks of emotion rule our dance feeling everything, leaving it all to chance we bask in the bright light of our heat searing all who dare to follow our beat. our music flashes are skins vibrate we are gluttons with a full plate tasting all that lifes feast will give nourished, well fed we dance to live.

<~> 27-Aug-02/1:27 PM
i love that dance! dance often, my friend!




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