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all sex (Lyric) by roses are read he is all sex
and cum and slick oil,
underneath his baggy shirts,
and rolled-up old-man
pants.
peering into her pink diary,
picking locks,
pondering the hot tub.
i can see her shimmering empty thoughts,
full of him.
and he sucks her dry.
and i wonder why she takes it all on her back,
how she keeps on dancing,
how she stays free.
he is all sex
and cum and slick oil,
underneath his baggy shirts,
and rolled-up old-man
pants.
and he sucks her dry.
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Posted: April 23, 2002 7:31 AM PDT; Last modified: April 23, 2002 7:31 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.4269624 Overall Rank: 3026 Comments:
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23-Apr-02/5:54 PM
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I take this very darkly; I'm not entirely sure it was meant that way, but it sounds like incest or pedophilia or some such. very vague. it has a good rhythm. :)
Fascinating.
Really?
whoa... serious stuff...
i will get right to the point: holy shit. wow.
reminds me of an old PJ Harvey song. almost works...but not quite.
you're good
I wish I wrote so
My brothers paranoid, but i told him its not about him.
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