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all sex (Lyric) by roses are read

he is all sex and cum and slick oil, underneath his baggy shirts, and rolled-up old-man pants. peering into her pink diary, picking locks, pondering the hot tub. i can see her shimmering empty thoughts, full of him. and he sucks her dry. and i wonder why she takes it all on her back, how she keeps on dancing, how she stays free. he is all sex and cum and slick oil, underneath his baggy shirts, and rolled-up old-man pants. and he sucks her dry.

nentwined 23-Apr-02/5:54 PM
I take this very darkly; I'm not entirely sure it was meant that way, but it sounds like incest or pedophilia or some such. very vague. it has a good rhythm. :)




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