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Valentine (Free verse) by mikeyh53581
Love poems written hastily
Disjointed thoughts
Put into sentences
And paragraphs
Valentines Day
Are these people really in love?
When did they know?
How? Why? Where?
Pet names and silly disguises
Of shared experiences
Was Shakespeare ever this pathetic?
Truly, Madly, and Deeply?
Is that even possible
In a world like ours?
So far apart we drift
Old lovers on a sea of new
They meet in coffeehouses
On the phone, or in bars
Complete each other
Only to find out later, they're wrong
Different endings than imagined
Lives changed
For worse or better
Just once, could it be better?
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.6666665
Weighted score: 5.3333335
Overall Rank: 3485
Posted: July 9, 2002 8:08 AM PDT; Last modified: July 9, 2002 8:10 AM PDT
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