| Re: Let me let me go by Eric Johnson |
9-Jul-02/3:21 PM |
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sad and moving... is very good though... hope you can find a true friend...
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| Re: The Pain by silver |
9-Jul-02/3:22 PM |
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hmmm... intriguing... hope you make it...
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| Re: tears beyond hope by Mystifying |
9-Jul-02/3:28 PM |
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pretty good storyline, and wording... work on spelling though please... keep trying though...
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| Re: Garden by ifni |
9-Jul-02/3:29 PM |
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cute and silly... not bad... although I don't know what virii are?? *smile*
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| Re: The beggar in me by dilips_10 |
9-Jul-02/3:38 PM |
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interesting concept... once wrote a poem based on a very similiar idea... good job...
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| Re: Bloody cow by ==Doylum |
18-Jul-02/6:53 PM |
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it's only getting this cause it rhymes so well... try spelling better...
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| Re: Crossspecies Blues by ==Doylum |
18-Jul-02/6:55 PM |
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only cause of rhyme... work on actually doing something with your time...
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19-Jul-02/2:42 PM |
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this is pretty good... despite the sadness and being alone... :-)
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
19-Jul-02/2:43 PM |
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true.. and interesting ideas...
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| Re: Angelic Triumvirate by Sterling5583 |
19-Jul-02/2:46 PM |
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how very enduring and sweet... I feel for you, but I am also going down the same path, and my parents don't seem to understand... keep it up...
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19-Jul-02/2:50 PM |
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interesting... not quite sure of the whole theme or what not, but hey... still interesting...
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| Re: Before Existence by Jsylum |
19-Jul-02/2:54 PM |
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I really truly liked this... interesting, intriguing, and truly good... would love to know where the inspiration came from...
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| Re: Daughter by pkdrunner |
19-Jul-02/3:10 PM |
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cute and sweet... I enjoyed it...
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| Re: The Snowglobe by josh_5o |
19-Jul-02/3:18 PM |
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| Re: desire is the constant by silvertongueddevil |
19-Jul-02/3:19 PM |
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this so sounds like something I'm going through.. good job...
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| Re: Ode to a Red Trashcan by nentwined |
19-Jul-02/3:21 PM |
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| Re: i am on the carpet by silvertongueddevil |
19-Jul-02/3:22 PM |
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hmmmm?? weird.. maybe something there... I'm not sure...
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
19-Jul-02/3:27 PM |
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um, good idea, bad wording...
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| Re: endless eternity: by Sapphire |
19-Jul-02/3:29 PM |
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19-Jul-02/3:48 PM |
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