Re: Jericho by goldfish	7-Jul-02/12:38 PM
Very intriguing... it almost seems like it's possibly based on the bible... although if I'm wrong let me know... *smile* EF
Re: White Lie by ErgoErgun	7-Jul-02/12:39 PM
hmmm... and where did this idea come from?? just curious... EF
Re: Reflection Upon Looking in Roget's Thesaurus, Copyright 1941 by Syr Charles	7-Jul-02/12:42 PM
I guess I could agree... I've dealt I believe with the same type of situation... EF
Re: Unknown Plains by Twisted Wizard	9-Jul-02/3:06 PM
ok, let's just say I never want to go to this place, but you did try, and I'd say you did a good job with wording... *smile* but you still may want to read some more poetry before you write...
regarding some deleted poem...	9-Jul-02/3:08 PM
huh?! I don't know where this is coming from or where it's going... sort of lost direction with this... at least you tried...
regarding some deleted poem...	9-Jul-02/3:09 PM
hmmm... interesting in a weird way... oh well...
regarding some deleted poem...	9-Jul-02/3:11 PM
just plain freaking weird... um, maybe work on your subjects and how to go about writing a poem about them?? oh well...
Re: Take Me Away When You're Gone by Twisted Wizard	9-Jul-02/3:12 PM
sad but pretty good... more meaningful and emotional so to speak... *smile*
regarding some deleted poem...	9-Jul-02/3:14 PM
um, ok, sounds like you commited suicide for bumble bees... hmmm... pretty sad actually... other than that, I liked it.. .the wording and rhyming were good...
Re: To Mother by lynnstratton	9-Jul-02/3:16 PM
awww.... how sweet and sad... very good poem though... I'm sorry about your mother...