on White Lie by ErgoErgun
7 Jul 2002, 12:39 PM
hmmm... and where did this idea come from?? just curious... EF
on Reflection Upon Looking in Roget's Thesaurus, Copyright 1941 by Syr Charles
7 Jul 2002, 12:42 PM
I guess I could agree... I've dealt I believe with the same type of situation... EF
on Unknown Plains by Twisted Wizard
9 Jul 2002, 3:06 PM
ok, let's just say I never want to go to this place, but you did try,
and I'd say you did a good job with wording... *smile* but you
still may want to read some more poetry before you write...
and I'd say you did a good job with wording... *smile* but you
still may want to read some more poetry before you write...
on some deleted poem
9 Jul 2002, 3:08 PM
huh?! I don't know where this is coming from or where it's going...
sort of lost direction with this... at least you tried...
sort of lost direction with this... at least you tried...
on some deleted poem
9 Jul 2002, 3:09 PM
hmmm... interesting in a weird way... oh well...
on some deleted poem
9 Jul 2002, 3:11 PM
just plain freaking weird... um, maybe work on your subjects and how to go about writing a poem about them?? oh well...
on Take Me Away When You're Gone by Twisted Wizard
9 Jul 2002, 3:12 PM
sad but pretty good... more meaningful and emotional so to speak... *smile*
on some deleted poem
9 Jul 2002, 3:14 PM
um, ok, sounds like you commited suicide for bumble bees... hmmm... pretty sad actually... other than that, I liked it.. .the wording and rhyming were good...
on To Mother by lynnstratton
9 Jul 2002, 3:16 PM
awww.... how sweet and sad... very good poem though... I'm sorry about your mother...