Re: Lizzie Boredom by Bonehiss |
14-Sep-14/6:00 PM |
i hope you did not send this to her.
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Re: a comment on it is my turn this season by daniella |
5-Sep-14/7:33 PM |
get the to your place beneath the bridge, scamper down from whence you came.
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Re: "She Phoned This Morning" by ARTIE |
2-Sep-14/4:07 PM |
sense and sensibility permeates this piece, which indeed seems more like the intro to what is a beautiful ode to love lost
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Re: Let's praise great Britannia's golden days of now and then by Edna Sweetlove |
2-Sep-14/4:03 PM |
you lost me at the onset.
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Re: The Young Girl From Khartoum by Edna Sweetlove |
2-Sep-14/4:01 PM |
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Re: a comment on where once by daniella |
1-Jun-14/7:34 PM |
thank you. i revisited this and thank you all for your comments
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Re: a comment on Breaking Breath by daniella |
1-Jun-14/7:31 PM |
thank you :)) i am myself kind of tangled in my head.. ee cummings was my poet father.
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Re: Wind By Any Other Name by Edna Sweetlove |
30-Dec-12/1:20 PM |
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Re: a comment on it is my turn this season by daniella |
29-Dec-12/12:54 PM |
thank you for your thoughts. seasons are really random if we don't look at the calendar and peer deep into the soul instead.
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Re: a comment on it is my turn this season by daniella |
29-Dec-12/12:53 PM |
daphne dear. that is lovely. thank you i will go check out your new website!
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Re: a comment on it is my turn this season by daniella |
29-Dec-12/12:52 PM |
drivel is under rated my sweet degenerate
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Re: Twilight Affair by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
9-Dec-11/11:32 AM |
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Re: Grafton Street Late Joys by Engelbert Humpalot |
9-Dec-11/11:30 AM |
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Re: The Editor by Dovina |
22-May-07/10:34 AM |
you need an editor. and someone to let you on to the fact: you don't buy fruit from trees, known or otherwise... and lastly, as a poet you should know all trees... tsk tsk
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Re: The Happy Side of Misery by Dovina |
22-May-07/10:30 AM |
you get us about a quarter of the way there and we are begging for some chocolate milk served by kids on the side of the road.
quaint and so pastoral
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Re: Altitude by half.italian |
20-May-07/9:26 PM |
i'm sorry, it's just not well written.
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Re: Grab Out For J. Christ! by Sing4Jesus! |
20-May-07/9:19 PM |
There are some misconceptions here, that make the zealous hodge podge verses sting even more.
God did not make our lives to be worthless.
His enemies may have killed Jesus, but according to the New Testament, this was part of God's plan... How else could he have fulfilled the passion?
And lastly, because I want to go to sleep, you actually think we could actually hurt the greatest grandest architect...You think it matters if we believe or not??
Only to our own faith... God exists regardless of us, and He or She or whatever our creator is, does not need our votes.
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Re: broken bottles by richa |
20-May-07/8:33 PM |
it's a barren landscape.
i love: brimming with storm but no rejoicing. it makes no sense, but sings.
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Re: 311006 txt to russia by daniella |
20-May-07/8:22 PM |
i would edit it, but then lose all ur comments... so it stays as is. but thanx for the feedback!
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Re: 11th September (a senyru) by scitz |
19-Oct-06/4:11 AM |
9/11 was an inside job.
connect all the mind boggling dots at:
www.loosechange911.com/index_main.html
wake up america
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