Re: Life by 47Ronin |
27-Jan-04/5:08 AM |
Excellent. Almost as good as my "Existence".
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Re: Under a better bed wetter by Shardik |
27-Jan-04/4:55 AM |
Two words:
Retard poem.
That is all.
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Re: From Hell, a Vilanelle by horus8 |
10-Dec-03/1:14 PM |
Average. Not nearly random or insane enough.
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Re: a comment on Plume Gateau by Bobjim |
1-Dec-03/3:24 AM |
No, I am an artistic genious! My talents will outshine your pathetic little mock-life 10 times at least! Now, begone with you, or I will mock you a second time.
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Re: Down on Dogs by Bobjim |
1-Dec-03/3:16 AM |
I'm really down on my knee's this week, just for you Bob.
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Re: . by Bobjim |
30-Nov-03/3:51 PM |
It's true you know. Anyone want to scratch my big, hairy balls? Anyone?
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Re: a comment on EGG by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? |
30-Nov-03/3:43 PM |
By the way, that was a hint. Take it.
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Re: a comment on EGG by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? |
30-Nov-03/3:43 PM |
Has it occured to you both that you are both sad, sad little pre-pubesent fuckwits? No, probably not, or you'd shut up.
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Re: Bruce Lee is a Lotus Ninja by Shit-Crumpets |
30-Nov-03/3:39 PM |
Shut the fuck up you preteen tit. I bet you can't even get do the ninja moves on mortal kombat, let alone in your ( and I use this in the broadest possible term) 'life'.
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Re: a comment on voices on the bus by Crakyamuni |
30-Nov-03/3:36 PM |
Please note I didn't read your poem first time as I assumed it would be typical newbee crap (or hasbeen crap. take your pick). But I must confess, on closer inspection, I was dead right.
WHO'S YA DADDY!!!!
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Re: voices on the bus by Crakyamuni |
30-Nov-03/3:34 PM |
Are you some sort of nut? Hearing voices means you need help, dumbass.
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Re: Experimental Robot Questionaire by horus8 |
30-Nov-03/3:26 PM |
This is a purile piece of shit. So is my work, I know, but mine is intentional.
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Re: Plume Gateau by Bobjim |
30-Nov-03/3:25 PM |
Ok, which one of you 2 buggers has submitted this purile piece of crap in *MY* account?
Oh, wait stupid question.
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Re: Those weeks I slit my wrists to the Smiths by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
13-Nov-03/7:33 AM |
Liked the beginning, great stuff. Should have kept the initial happy note all the way through. Have you tried making love to geese as a method of cheering yourself up. ...7...
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Re: a comment on Greybie Blue by abecedarian |
11-Nov-03/4:30 AM |
Only if it amuses, inspires or is easy to ignore.
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Re: Greybie Blue by abecedarian |
9-Nov-03/11:03 AM |
Read my poems about dogs retard. this poem is almost as rejected as nun jokes.
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and don't try and talk to me
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Re: The dog that loved a chicken by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
5-Nov-03/2:03 AM |
excellent another person in a sorry state of mind.
although he got better at the end, he made up for it with the chicken.
Not really a poem though, maybe i should post "The Authelage" on here. tis a far greater tale.
i give you 10 for the wonderful images conjured during the last paragraph.
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Re: i love this shit by Yatasuma |
5-Nov-03/1:46 AM |
I give you 1 for having the correct number of syllables.
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Re: Jesus and the spider (Should have bought a GT 500 Glider) by Don-Quixote |
27-Oct-03/12:14 PM |
What an interesting poem. Did you know that Jesus was actually a spider?
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Re: a comment on Pet Hatreds by Bobjim |
17-Oct-03/7:19 AM |
who knows? who cares? no-one in all likelihood. don't ask stupid questions or i will write nasty poems about you. i won't even put in enough effort to give it rhyme or rhythm.
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