on Suicide over the course of a lifetime by GregDeEgg
27 Apr 2004, 5:10 AM
Hang your head in shame. Actually no, crawl into a hole and die
on Once Upon A Time ( a senyru ) by Mr Pig
31 Mar 2004, 6:31 AM
I agree completely with all of the above. My ignorance in this matter is not at all obvious and I have a highly enlightened knowledge of what you're talking about.
on post-rock messiah by jsd
31 Mar 2004, 6:27 AM
I was going to read this poem, but I got bored after the 3rd line. Still, I'll give you a 5 for trying.
replying on Poetry in action by Bobjim
24 Mar 2004, 10:27 AM
i like 3, that'll do
replying on Poetry in action by Bobjim
24 Mar 2004, 10:26 AM
no, i mean the list of numbers that comes a bit after
and you know it
and you know it
replying on Poetry in action by Bobjim
24 Mar 2004, 9:26 AM
What makes you think I'd trust Shuushin?
replying on Poetry in action by Bobjim
24 Mar 2004, 9:10 AM
I know what you're up to you know. You're trying to confuse me with big words, well it won't work, I have a dictionary.
Now, if only I could read...
Now, if only I could read...
replying on Poetry in action by Bobjim
24 Mar 2004, 9:06 AM
Are you stupid? I give a syllable count, you disagree, I name the source. What do you think the poster said?
replying on Poetry in action by Bobjim
22 Mar 2004, 11:44 AM
The huge poetry poster in our english department agrees with me. I have every confidence in it's creator, and it makes me feel clever.
replying on Poetry in action by Bobjim
22 Mar 2004, 9:59 AM
Who said any of it was unaccented. I like the last bit though, but I think I'll go to my local instead of an Irish pub.
replying on Poetry in action by Bobjim
22 Mar 2004, 9:43 AM
Syllables in: a limerick my poem
8 8
8 8
5 6
5 6
8 8
8 8
8 8
5 6
5 6
8 8
replying on Poetry in action by Bobjim
22 Mar 2004, 9:07 AM
Technically it's not a limerick. Limericks have one less syllable in the 3rd and 4th lines.
replying on Poetry in action by Bobjim
22 Mar 2004, 8:47 AM
That's scarily similar to the first version. But I decided to actually use this on someone, so I modified it a bit.
on Lunacy by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w
3 Mar 2004, 7:23 AM
I like this one. I feel it could almost apply to me.
10
10
on Cutters Part II The Recut (Limerick Triplet) by Shardik
3 Mar 2004, 7:19 AM
If you're going to do bad poetry, do it properly. Still, a 7 for trying.
replying on Steve Irwin by Bobjim
4 Feb 2004, 9:13 AM
What can I say, if it had actually been me that wrote that I might feel stupid. But I didn't, and I don't.
replying on Steve Irwin by Bobjim
4 Feb 2004, 8:37 AM
Since you didn't spot it, I'll point it out to make you feel stupid:
"Till" is completely wrong anyway, it should be "'Til".
"Till" is completely wrong anyway, it should be "'Til".
on A Beard Most Foul by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w
4 Feb 2004, 1:38 AM
I feel that this poem is written from your own personal experience.
Begone thou foul, once bearded reject.
Begone thou foul, once bearded reject.