| Re: Suicide over the course of a lifetime by GregDeEgg |
27-Apr-04/5:10 AM |
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Hang your head in shame. Actually no, crawl into a hole and die
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| Re: Once Upon A Time ( a senyru ) by Mr Pig |
31-Mar-04/6:31 AM |
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I agree completely with all of the above. My ignorance in this matter is not at all obvious and I have a highly enlightened knowledge of what you're talking about.
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| Re: post-rock messiah by jsd |
31-Mar-04/6:27 AM |
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I was going to read this poem, but I got bored after the 3rd line. Still, I'll give you a 5 for trying.
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| Re: a comment on Edd by Bobjim |
24-Mar-04/10:31 AM |
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that would have been my alter ego, Jimbob, the Lord High Dismisser of Idiocy then.
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| Re: a comment on Poetry in action by Bobjim |
24-Mar-04/10:27 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Poetry in action by Bobjim |
24-Mar-04/10:26 AM |
no, i mean the list of numbers that comes a bit after
and you know it
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| Re: a comment on Edd by Bobjim |
24-Mar-04/9:52 AM |
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I have not read this "egg" which you mention, otherwise it might have been.
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| Re: a comment on Poetry in action by Bobjim |
24-Mar-04/9:26 AM |
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What makes you think I'd trust Shuushin?
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| Re: a comment on Poetry in action by Bobjim |
24-Mar-04/9:10 AM |
I know what you're up to you know. You're trying to confuse me with big words, well it won't work, I have a dictionary.
Now, if only I could read...
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| Re: a comment on Poetry in action by Bobjim |
24-Mar-04/9:06 AM |
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Are you stupid? I give a syllable count, you disagree, I name the source. What do you think the poster said?
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| Re: a comment on Poetry in action by Bobjim |
22-Mar-04/11:44 AM |
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The huge poetry poster in our english department agrees with me. I have every confidence in it's creator, and it makes me feel clever.
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| Re: a comment on Poetry in action by Bobjim |
22-Mar-04/9:59 AM |
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Who said any of it was unaccented. I like the last bit though, but I think I'll go to my local instead of an Irish pub.
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| Re: a comment on Poetry in action by Bobjim |
22-Mar-04/9:43 AM |
Syllables in: a limerick my poem
8 8
8 8
5 6
5 6
8 8
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| Re: a comment on Poetry in action by Bobjim |
22-Mar-04/9:07 AM |
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Technically it's not a limerick. Limericks have one less syllable in the 3rd and 4th lines.
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| Re: a comment on Poetry in action by Bobjim |
22-Mar-04/8:47 AM |
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That's scarily similar to the first version. But I decided to actually use this on someone, so I modified it a bit.
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| Re: Lunacy by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w |
3-Mar-04/7:23 AM |
I like this one. I feel it could almost apply to me.
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| Re: Cutters Part II The Recut (Limerick Triplet) by Shardik |
3-Mar-04/7:19 AM |
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If you're going to do bad poetry, do it properly. Still, a 7 for trying.
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| Re: a comment on Steve Irwin by Bobjim |
4-Feb-04/9:13 AM |
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What can I say, if it had actually been me that wrote that I might feel stupid. But I didn't, and I don't.
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| Re: a comment on Steve Irwin by Bobjim |
4-Feb-04/8:37 AM |
Since you didn't spot it, I'll point it out to make you feel stupid:
"Till" is completely wrong anyway, it should be "'Til".
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| Re: A Beard Most Foul by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w |
4-Feb-04/1:38 AM |
I feel that this poem is written from your own personal experience.
Begone thou foul, once bearded reject.
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