| Re: One Country by poetandknowit |
26-Dec-02/12:22 AM |
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lovely...10 How can anyone give this poem anything below an 8 beats the hell out of me.
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| Re: Doped Up Dr. Seuss by smlink84 |
25-Dec-02/6:59 PM |
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Are you old man river's retarded cousin? Yes, I thought so.
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| Re: Hot town, summer in the city! by bondjedi |
25-Dec-02/5:55 PM |
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Sorry...I don't dig...although I do dig mullets..ahhhhhhh....
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| Re: a comment on Hot town, summer in the city! by bondjedi |
25-Dec-02/3:15 PM |
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Must you steal from my site?
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| Re: Untitled by Sugarbbybuttrfly |
25-Dec-02/1:45 AM |
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Ahhh, but false hopes make the world go round. For if you didn't have false hopes then your existance would be completely meaningless to say the least. Perhaps it is....but false hopes are there to keep you from seeing this...get it?..yes...here's a shot of tequila...oh...let's not forget to chew the worm...it's a good source of protein...
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| Re: Untitled by Sugarbbybuttrfly |
25-Dec-02/1:38 AM |
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Be thankful...at least I didn't get you old man river's collection...it was out of print...nobody bought it.
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| Re: Untitled by Sugarbbybuttrfly |
25-Dec-02/1:34 AM |
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It's around 4:30am in PA...you must be an insomniac like me...or maybe you can't sleep because Santa is bringing you lots of presents.....oooooh...open up the blue one..it's from me....ahhhh...a book of short poems by Horus8. Enjoy!
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| Re: Untitled by Sugarbbybuttrfly |
25-Dec-02/1:22 AM |
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You're 16 right? Your poetry is good, but try to diversify the areas in which you write. Ahhh...my apologies madam...it's good to know that our youth knows who Paul Anka is....I'm in my early 20s...ahhh, but I feel old, older at least.
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| Re: Untitled by Sugarbbybuttrfly |
25-Dec-02/1:05 AM |
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.....and they called it puppy love..oh I guess they'll never know (paul anka)....60s version of Timberlake....when you have to think about it then my sweet one...you're not in love....have an oreo...it will make you feel better....ahhhhh
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| Re: Thought by Quarton |
25-Dec-02/12:58 AM |
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Your poem reminds me of a Philosophy class I took in college. We spent a whole semester arguing dream vs. reality...how do you know you're not asleep right now...prove it. Anyway...maybe you should ponder on that idea for a while....8
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| Re: guitar music and lies by w~* ATHENA *~w |
25-Dec-02/12:51 AM |
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Hmmmmm...I gather our lolipop is a womanizer and a jiggalo...you sound angry...6
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| Re: the surrender by brazen |
25-Dec-02/12:34 AM |
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If this is for me...thank you...I enjoyed it...maybe I'll let you taste me but then you'll get tooth decay..ayyyyy...here's some Mentadent.
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| Re: Godly by brazen |
24-Dec-02/11:04 PM |
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Another poor me poem. Life's a bitch...get over it.....here you can have my family....cheers!
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| Re: Little Johnie's Jihad by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
24-Dec-02/9:10 PM |
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Lolipop you've outdone yourself..here's a 5 for you, Fellini and a porn-star midget named Bridgett......
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| Re: corners by rockinindividual |
24-Dec-02/7:34 PM |
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| Re: The Coming Light by poetandknowit |
23-Dec-02/9:18 PM |
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Despite the negative comments, I actually quite like the poem. It looks like a poem that my college professor's assistant would write....have a 9
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| Re: First move by aliena |
22-Dec-02/3:36 PM |
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for some odd reason I like the cheezy poem...but then again I love Celtic cheese...ahhhh....if you scratch my back I'll give you an oz.
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| Re: Foreplay by INTRANSIT |
22-Dec-02/3:26 PM |
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the pain and sorrow of a truck driver...but hey I thought they were plenty of hookers at Exxon...8
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| Re: Life of some girl. by Plasticgirlwithgun |
21-Dec-02/7:49 PM |
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maybe you should try dipping your hand in sulfuric acid...ssssssss
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| Re: For you my dear. by Plasticgirlwithgun |
21-Dec-02/7:44 PM |
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you godforsaken broad....hahahaaaaaa...that's the best you can come up with????...next...ahhhhh...time for Celtic Cheese...care for an oz?
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