Re: Sophisticant by Bluesee |
15-Jul-02/12:47 PM |
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Re: moon rants by bluwiz |
15-Jul-02/12:45 PM |
That is fantastic!!!I laughed out loud for an unseemly time.I love it!! The idea of a bitter, jaded moon is great.
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Re: him by akriti_mehta |
15-Jul-02/12:25 PM |
K??dresh and moonhound are right. This is pretty bad.
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Re: Black Hole Soul by Red_is_life |
15-Jul-02/12:22 PM |
I wrote one similar to this and with an eerily similar title when I was 13. Then I grew up.
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Re: Scythe by Isis |
15-Jul-02/12:20 PM |
Death is never delicious.
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Re: Virus by bluwiz |
15-Jul-02/12:13 PM |
That was not me.The 9 however..
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Re: Infection by bluwiz |
15-Jul-02/12:03 PM |
I mean I love the imagery and metaphors. I'm by and large sick of flowers and sappy rambles. Your stuff is different and a welcome change.
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Re: Virus by bluwiz |
15-Jul-02/11:55 AM |
I know it's about them.I meant in my life. it's hard to type inflections. It's a great piece.
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Re: Infection by bluwiz |
15-Jul-02/11:53 AM |
There needs to be more poems like this.
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Re: Two Eagles by Frass |
15-Jul-02/11:51 AM |
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Re: Virus by bluwiz |
15-Jul-02/11:50 AM |
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Re: Anonymous by T.Becquerel II |
15-Jul-02/10:47 AM |
Mary, mother of God, that's pretentious.
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Re: Untitled by Piano |
15-Jul-02/10:41 AM |
Titles would be nice.This one made me smile.
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Re: One night stand by pkdrunner |
12-Jul-02/5:19 PM |
Don't you hate when that happens? Better than a hacked-up hooker, though, believe you me...
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Re: Dragons by austimb |
12-Jul-02/3:55 PM |
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Re: If We Lived by ZCatcher |
12-Jul-02/12:25 PM |
that's the sweetest thing!
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Re: Dragons by Roisin |
12-Jul-02/12:14 PM |
Nice. This world needs more quality dragon poetry.
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Re: Knowing you by shwenatjadeflower |
12-Jul-02/12:12 PM |
This is sweet. Don't mind Horus8, he's californian. I like the first stanza quite a bit.
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Re: tullip by christian |
11-Jul-02/6:25 AM |
Your spelling needs work, but that's so sweet..
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Re: Wejy by christian |
11-Jul-02/6:23 AM |
Wedgies suck. I knew a guy who was wedgied so hard his underwear ripped.
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