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Untitled (Free verse) by Piano
heard you talked to my mother today
don't think I don't know what you're
doing
don't dance around in those little circles
skipping around in
those tiny, tiny circles
you're no better at skipping than me
'cause I'
ve been skipping all my life
look at my watch and I see
it's time to
stop skipping
and time to start running
'cause it's doing me no good
I'm
still in the same little circle
just like you
pretty soon we're gonna
end up
walking a hole in the ground
now I climbed up to watch you
and I'
ll watch you from my tower of books
and from above you don't look so
scary
but you're looking pretty scared
and maybe you should 'cause
what
if I fell off my tower
you'd be the one to break my fall
I'm seeing just
the top of your head
it doesn't look too soft
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Weighted score: 4.8963766
Overall Rank: 9900
Posted: March 16, 2002 1:17 AM PST; Last modified: March 16, 2002 1:17 AM PST
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