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If We Lived

Member since 2002 · Posted 9 Jul 2002 · 4 comments

If we lived in a mud house In, say, Arizona Miles from the nearest dirt road, Life would be sweet As a mess of mesquite In our little adobe abode. If we lived in an igloo In upper Alaska, 99 miles north of Nome, We could get by On Eskimo Pie In our cute little dome of a home. If we live to a hundred And twenty, or thirty, With Alzheimer's firmly set in, Each day, for the first time, We'll see one another, And re-fall in love once again.

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4 comments

[8] nentwined 9-Jul-02/4:23 PM Reply
very cute and very sweet. cool. :)
[n/a] razorgrin 12-Jul-02/12:25 PM Reply
that's the sweetest thing!
[10] emilys369 26-Jul-02/6:25 PM Reply
awwwww....that is such a sweet poem!!
[8] tuthaliash 22-Jan-04/5:41 PM Reply
Clever...reminds me of Ogden Nash. Delightful!