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If We Lived (Lyric) by ZCatcher
If we lived in a mud house In, say, Arizona Miles from the nearest dirt road, Life would be sweet As a mess of mesquite In our little adobe abode. If we lived in an igloo In upper Alaska, 99 miles north of Nome, We could get by On Eskimo Pie In our cute little dome of a home. If we live to a hundred And twenty, or thirty, With Alzheimer's firmly set in, Each day, for the first time, We'll see one another, And re-fall in love once again.

Up the ladder: School 61
Down the ladder: More 7-Eleven holdups.

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.7272725
Weighted score: 5.3636365
Overall Rank: 3278
Posted: July 9, 2002 4:15 PM PDT; Last modified: July 9, 2002 4:15 PM PDT
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[8] nentwined @ 66.92.183.34 | 9-Jul-02/4:23 PM | Reply
very cute and very sweet. cool. :)
[n/a] razorgrin @ 142.166.108.177 | 12-Jul-02/12:25 PM | Reply
that's the sweetest thing!
[10] emilys369 @ 66.188.240.202 | 26-Jul-02/6:25 PM | Reply
awwwww....that is such a sweet poem!!
[8] tuthaliash @ 63.198.141.118 | 22-Jan-04/5:41 PM | Reply
Clever...reminds me of Ogden Nash. Delightful!
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