regarding some deleted poem...	22-Aug-02/6:51 AM
this is a really good piece. You write well. I don't like you but you write damn well.
regarding some deleted poem...	22-Aug-02/6:52 AM
this is a really good piece. You write well. I don't like you but you write damn well. I recognized the sexton-ness. nice.
Re: Awesome Heir by Shin-Bojangles	22-Aug-02/8:18 AM
coincidence, but now i think I want to see it. I once started a short story about a girl who grew a penis out of her elbow..
Re: Awesome Heir by Shin-Bojangles	22-Aug-02/10:08 AM
An organ only has a gender of its own if you get down to the chromosomes. The shape of it is what identifies you as a boy or a lady. Even that is a fuzzy definition if you get into hermaphroditism and its variants. Gender: ya got meaty bits 'tween ya legs. take a guess and have fun with 'em.
Re: {Porn*Star}{Hai*kus} by horus8	23-Aug-02/5:56 AM
Goddamn terrific, this is. Leos make me insane and violent.
Re: Questions to the Unknown by Mephisto	23-Aug-02/6:06 AM
Are you still in high school? Do you wear too much eyeliner? If not, then I'm fresh out of explanations for your work.
Re: Rainbow Tears by talking_goldfish	23-Aug-02/6:08 AM
I say nice things about poems that aren't crap. When they are crap, I say so. This is a bad poem. Really bad.
Re: Gilded Stumps of Olde (AN STORY THAT IS NOT AN POEME) by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	23-Aug-02/6:34 AM
best story I've read in a while. I wiggle my leg before the genius that is -=Dark_Angel=-. Truly sir, you are the king of kings.
Re: Dignity by kthulah	23-Aug-02/9:32 AM
Pride is all. It's you, god's woman who is making a fool of yourself. There are many kinds of love and this is a beautiful example of one of the better and most ignored kinds. Sort of sad that your closed definitions involve only hugging and fucking and birds and hearts. kthulah, the non-possessiveness is wonderful and something which many "love" poems cannot accept.
Re: it must be nice. (or: why i don't write much about my past) by kthulah	23-Aug-02/9:36 AM
god's wife: you're a whiny, pompous, arrogant bitch who wouldn't recognize good writing if it bit her in her middle-class ass. Though you can write moderately well, somehow you miss the point of every thing you read.
Re: Awesome Heir by Shin-Bojangles	25-Aug-02/10:53 AM
Looks like someone woke up on the wrong side of the cage this morning. pity you lack the yarbles to post any of you no doubt fascinating works up for all of us to bask in your genius. yes I am involved with Mr. Bojangles, you pathetic litlle pissant, and I have been for longer than you have been in school, kid. Your "size" comments suggest that you have issues about your own little member. Don't worry, I'm sure there are some exercises you can do for that. I get the strong impression that you don't really talk to girls all that much, you have some anger issues that should really be worked on.What you don't seem to get (among many things) is that I made the comments which seem to enrage you so were not made seriously. You didn't say much about poems, though. You mostly directed your inarticulate wrath toward the fact that I'm getting some and you're not. i'm curious, why is it a silly idea to make love again?
Re: Flight of the Samurai (Act II) by Shin-Bojangles	25-Aug-02/11:04 AM
As I said before, my comments were made in a joking fashion. over your head they went. I imagine you generallly lack a sense of humour, except when you and your "posse" are out raping joggers. Bojangles is not a Samurai. What are you, in junior high?! "heh, heh, they're doin' it." As for the half-assed insults 1."bitch" and 2."cunt" : 1. guilty as charged and 2.yeah, I've got one of those. As for the "stupid" one, The fact that I don't feel the need to make utterly moronic speculations about the relationships of others, using sad attempts at obscenity for punctuation shows that I am a fair bit more intelligent than yourself. Grow up, write something, maybe leave the trailer park more..
Re: Sure-it-fits! {haiku*series} by <{Baba^Yaga}>	25-Aug-02/12:57 PM
quality.
Re: father Worked Nights by poetandknowit	26-Aug-02/3:20 PM
that's really damn good.
Re: Awesome Heir by Shin-Bojangles	27-Aug-02/6:01 AM
Dahling, you're still fixated upon my relationships. Why? Does it give you a thrill of some sort? You don't post your poems because as you put it, yours suck. I wouldn't know, but you're likely right. The Canada thing...Cohen is great, Atwood is crap and so is Nowlan (get the names you drop RIGHT, you illiterate boob). joe Blades lives down my street. he's pretentious and a shitty writer to boot. His girlfriend is really ugly (not that that has anything to do with anything). I do take offense to the goth thing, because I am for fucking sure not a goth. P&K: thanks. This kid does have issues with sexuality. I don't think our sex life is necessarily "utterly exposed", just stated that it's there. There are people here who are here to better themselves as writers and all this high school troglodyte is doing is childish name-calling for its own sake.
Re: Sunshine by alexander	27-Aug-02/6:22 AM
I love this one.
Re: Awesome Heir by Shin-Bojangles	27-Aug-02/6:36 AM
okeydoo. Here, by special request: "b00b".
Re: Flight of the Samurai (Act III) by Shin-Bojangles	27-Aug-02/6:38 AM
A profound truth.
Re: Awesome Heir by Shin-Bojangles	27-Aug-02/6:39 AM
Never let it be said that I'm a total meanie.
Re: The Hand of God by Christof	27-Aug-02/6:48 AM
It's too fickin' early and this one is perfect.