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11-Oct-02/6:54 AM |
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Absolutely brilliant. true. kicking ass, as always.
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11-Oct-02/6:56 AM |
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Yikes, the genius. rockin' my socks as usual.
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| Re: Hit & Run by horus8 |
11-Oct-02/6:58 AM |
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I like the "back of a honda". Sounds like quite a time.
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11-Oct-02/6:59 AM |
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that's just terrible. lose the "u" 's and read more. try new rhyme schemes.
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11-Oct-02/7:01 AM |
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| Re: more{Porn*Star}{Hai*kus} by horus8 |
11-Oct-02/7:03 AM |
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quality porn poems. dirty in a wonderful way.
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11-Oct-02/7:06 AM |
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pure cheese. typos and a crap rhythm make for a true literary dryheave.
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11-Oct-02/7:09 AM |
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The virginity thing is idiotic. This is beyond sappy. This "right" and "wrong" thing is another thing you should work on. Your mother would be embarrassed.
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11-Oct-02/7:13 AM |
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lean to spell. F-A-T-E, for starters." Fiery" flames, you mean. This "sin" thing worries me, though, kid. it really does. Trying to call forth angels is pretty fucking dumb. (calling forth anything isn't that bright really) As a poem though, it's pretty bad.
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15-Oct-02/2:14 PM |
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I like waffles. especially magic ones. any unique properties to the syrup?
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| Re: Child of my Buttocks by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
15-Oct-02/2:16 PM |
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Fan-fookin-tastic. truly an epic for the ages. I enjoy it greatly.
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| Re: First date (for Larry, a lesbian vampire) by Bachus |
15-Oct-02/2:18 PM |
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A wise entity once said:" I vant to lick your girlfreind! Bweah!" I'm entertained.
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| Re: Devotion by Tyriana |
15-Oct-02/2:18 PM |
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| Re: AIDS Bonanza! by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
15-Oct-02/2:22 PM |
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Calm down, poetandwhatever. At your age you're liable to a heart attack.
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| Re: a genius by moonUnit |
16-Oct-02/7:19 AM |
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the end makes me think of a cut-out picture shrine with incense and candles.
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| Re: Midnight Dream by Katie |
16-Oct-02/7:24 AM |
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It's funny at least. Sorry kitty, you don't write well enough to do too much for me. on the other hand, if anonymous online diddling with the morbidly obese Everquest player described by Dark Angel is what puts a smile on your face, who am I to judge?
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| Re: White Wasp Boy - La Senza Superhero by ==Doylum |
16-Oct-02/7:30 AM |
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I'm grinning like a demon despite the mental image. clever.
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| Re: The Thought Of It by Christof |
16-Oct-02/7:32 AM |
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That's amazing. The fox reminded me of several disturbing childhood memories of a fur farm. Chilly.
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| Re: You Can by Dariana |
17-Oct-02/11:48 AM |
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Tintagiles, you only like it so little after hearing me singing bits of it while quite tanked.
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21-Oct-02/1:26 PM |
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Very nice. I'd like some more drunkenness in my life.
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