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18-Sep-02/7:04 AM |
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for the bon jovi quote, dark angel, you shall get eternal raisinless bagels and attractive busty wenches. As for this poem, Dream Machine, visit the Chuch of Euthanasia site. They will help you fix your pain.
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| Re: Fleas by bigbigdog |
19-Sep-02/1:41 PM |
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I never thought it would come to this, but p&K is right. plagiarists must be broken on the wheel after being skinned alive. that's just pathetic. Go away, doggie. you need to be put to sleep.
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| Re: Tugboats by poetandknowit |
20-Sep-02/7:01 AM |
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Doggie, though P&K is a lot of things, he posts what i assume to be his own poetry. you don't. you are a plagirizing little hack, robbing the graves of witers you could never be.
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| Re: Like and Unlike by Christof |
20-Sep-02/7:07 AM |
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The first death i remember was when an old man died on the street on my way to school. they hadn't covered him when i showed up. This poem evokes my memories of that so perfectly. Very real. uncontrived.
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| Re: The Astronomer's Lament by Christof |
23-Sep-02/7:28 AM |
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that's beautiful. The last 3 lines make it perfect. what can i say, i'm a sucker for space.
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| Re: Instructions to a Sculptor by Christof |
1-Oct-02/11:10 AM |
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Definitely in the heart. This is very beautiful. Sometimes it bothers me about how people develop blind spots for themselves. The rhythm is gorgeous.
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| Re: The Good Old Days in New Orleans by cobalt |
1-Oct-02/11:12 AM |
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1-Oct-02/11:21 AM |
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Ick. your words don't scan well, your format irritates me like an angry spider trapped in a pair of thong panties and your subject is dull and sappy. Get back on your knees and go back to sucking on crucifixes.
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3-Oct-02/11:15 AM |
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3-Oct-02/11:18 AM |
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that's beautiful. and familiar.
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8-Oct-02/11:51 AM |
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The poem is dull and doesn't have much to say, but spends too long saying it.3! Katie, no one gives a shit that you're blond. Look at meee, i'm a redhead! Also katie, is English not your first language? If it is, you have no excuse for that gushy diarrhea of a comment you wrote.
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8-Oct-02/11:55 AM |
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Dark Angel,I will one day build several churches in your honor.
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9-Oct-02/7:01 AM |
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poetandknowit, you're a dumb, boring dink. Age does not necessarily bring wisdom, as you prove. You embarrass yourself and amuse others. Lord I wish that kid had gotten you right in the pineal gland with that AK-47. you might get some insight through that new third eye. I like this poem.
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| Re: rapping on caffeine by blackball |
9-Oct-02/7:03 AM |
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That's really damn good. Short but says a lot.
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| Re: Drunken note #2 by blackball |
9-Oct-02/7:05 AM |
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Pay no attention to jigg. I'm not usually one for this strucure, but damn fine work.
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9-Oct-02/7:16 AM |
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I calls 'em like I sees 'em. I'm sure she's lovely in person, maybe i am really nice and like kittens and hugs. that said I'm saying thus far she seems like a ditz with a piss-poor grip on english and an auto-fetish for blondness. As for writing from the soul, nothing wrong with it. Doing it badly on the other hand is a nasty evil. I am somewhat offended at your rude name-calling. I'm quite mannerly, I took into consideration that she might have just picked up English. That's all. The ignorant one is more bothersome. I don't think you know much of me so that judgement might be somewhat premature. Why should I keep my comments to myself? We do have the right to free speech, even towards foolish people. thanks! jesus loves you!
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| Re: Safe Distance, 10-10-02 by Frass |
11-Oct-02/6:35 AM |
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Sorry someone you knew is dead. That said, I'm afraid I agree with Dark Angel. This isn't that great a piece of writing. It's pretty cliched and really, what do you know of his motivation? The piece lacks fire if that was what you were going for and also sadness if that was your goal. I came in with an open mind for this one, but I was disappointed.
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| Re: Theoretical Islamic Math by Bachus |
11-Oct-02/6:39 AM |
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| Re: Pilgrim by timfowler |
11-Oct-02/6:46 AM |
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Now this, i like this. great imagery.
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11-Oct-02/6:49 AM |
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But of course. With chanting and robes and stuff. I don't know what's wrong with these people, even re-reading this makes me happy.
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