| Re: Baby Soup by w~* ATHENA *~w |
20-Dec-02/4:04 AM |
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If you're going to steal REM's lyrics, please at least try to disguise them. Even better, DON'T STEAL THEM AT ALL!
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20-Dec-02/4:11 AM |
Aaaarrrggghhhh, watch out, Red_Neck's about to submit another one! Hide away everybody!
(Merry Christmas once again!)
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| Re: the feeling was never there by blackball |
20-Dec-02/4:15 AM |
Not bad, my friend, not bad at all. I like the line "praying for a moment..."
8/10
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20-Dec-02/4:18 AM |
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20-Dec-02/4:25 AM |
Oh wow, this is superb! I really love the last stanza-have a ten!
Merry Christmas and a happy New Year!
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| Re: pee haiku by New Life Drug |
20-Dec-02/4:26 AM |
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Bugger, I'm agreeing with poetandknowit! This is incredible, thank you NLD!
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| Re: March by <~> |
20-Dec-02/4:29 AM |
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Good stuff! Definately a 9, can't decide if it's enough for a ten...sod it, 10
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| Re: Junk by Bonehiss |
20-Dec-02/1:48 PM |
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Quite good-possibly better as a lyric?
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
20-Dec-02/1:50 PM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
20-Dec-02/6:23 PM |
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What the fuck's going on? This isn't the poem I responded to above. You sneaky devil, Settle...
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22-Dec-02/4:51 AM |
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Yes, but don't tell anyone...shh
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22-Dec-02/4:54 AM |
Marvellous, almost feel it deserves a ten...but that's just the reply I'm talking about.
Are you Blade in disguise? No, Blade's not that cunning...
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| Re: missing time by Bill Z Bub |
22-Dec-02/4:59 AM |
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Ah yes, possibly the best work today...have a nine.
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| Re: joyriding by Bill Z Bub |
22-Dec-02/5:04 AM |
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This is good, very good. 10
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| Re: affirmative action by thelonefrobros |
22-Dec-02/5:08 AM |
Dear God. I would give this a zero but that would risk you replacing Blade at the bottom. Instead I think I shall give it a ten, which will hopefully lift you out of the bottom fifteen so we NEVER HAVE TO SEE THIS PILE OF SHITE AGAIN!
And breathe.
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| Re: affirmative action by thelonefrobros |
22-Dec-02/5:09 AM |
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22-Dec-02/5:17 AM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
23-Dec-02/12:26 PM |
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I assume you read Edgar Allen Poe...no don't worry, just me trying to be clever...this is very good, very good indeed...particularly enjoyed the second stanza...nice work, 9
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23-Dec-02/12:27 PM |
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Sorry, I meant I enoyed the third stanza (the second's good too), my brain's not quite in tune with my eyes...hmm
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| Re: Foreplay by INTRANSIT |
23-Dec-02/12:31 PM |
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Hee hee, excellent poem, love the bit near the end ("To consume you endlessly...") 9/10
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