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14-Jan-03/6:14 AM |
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| Re: insomnia by Bill Z Bub |
14-Jan-03/6:34 AM |
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Yeah, I like this-it's very good!
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| Re: Where is My BabyGirl? by ChunkyHunkyMonkey |
14-Jan-03/6:38 AM |
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I thought this was crap until I read the last line of it (the poem, not the bit at the bottom). It really hit me-I don't know why, but still I will give you a nine.
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| Re: alienheart by Bill Z Bub |
15-Jan-03/1:05 AM |
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This poem seriously rocks, however I'm not 100 per cent sure that the TV references etc do work-even so, I can't really see anything else working so all I can say is "nice one!". 9
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| Re: Fuck by Bobjim |
15-Jan-03/5:22 AM |
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NOOOOO! The last line isn't complete!
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| Re: Disgusting Stickmen by Bobjim |
15-Jan-03/5:24 AM |
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What the fuck? Who is that?
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| Re: Disgusting Stickmen by Bobjim |
15-Jan-03/5:31 AM |
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No, the question was *who*?
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| Re: Disgusting Stickmen by Bobjim |
15-Jan-03/5:32 AM |
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Also, were you intending I vote for this?
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| Re: Disgusting Stickmen by Bobjim |
15-Jan-03/5:33 AM |
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Out of curiosity, why is his head seperated from his body? Surely that's gonna hurt...
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| Re: Bobjim, Jimbob by Spider-Man |
15-Jan-03/5:34 AM |
No, he chewed it off.
And by the way, he does mean to offend everybody. Especially you.
Funny poem, though.
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| Re: (e0)(af)(87e0) by nentwined |
15-Jan-03/5:35 AM |
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| Re: killer boredom butterfly (psychedelic) by nentwined |
15-Jan-03/5:37 AM |
Fabulous! Psychedelic Butterflies will remember this in one of our songs!!!! Wheeee!!!!! Heeheeheehee!
I like this so much it may have a ten! Foom!!
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| Re: Welsh Landscape Part One by Nicholas Jones |
15-Jan-03/5:39 AM |
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| Re: (e0)(af)(87e0) by nentwined |
15-Jan-03/5:39 AM |
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| Re: Playing Jerry and crap by w~* ATHENA *~w |
15-Jan-03/5:40 AM |
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15-Jan-03/5:42 AM |
Mr Tintagiles, she may have been tripping in the woods, but you've been tripping at your computer! Acid abounds etc.
Wonderful poem. 9
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| Re: (e0)(af)(87e0) by nentwined |
15-Jan-03/5:43 AM |
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By the by, what time is it over there?
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
15-Jan-03/5:47 AM |
Pretty good. The other one you just submitted was better, but still I like this quite a bit. 2nd to last stanza rocks.
You probably don't need advice from a teenager, however I am going to say that the third stanza doesn't totally fit in with the more ethereal atmosphere of the rest of it...however it all depends on what sort of people this is aimed at.
Don't let that detract from the fact that this is very good! 8
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| Re: Dexpression by Roisin |
15-Jan-03/5:53 AM |
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Ye-es. Not sure what to make of this...maybe another read will do it justice.
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| Re: Stranger by Roisin |
15-Jan-03/5:55 AM |
I am the stRanger (thx Caducus).
Pretty good poem!
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