| Re: Goodbye Daddy by NewbieMe |
13-Nov-02/6:10 AM |
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| Re: Obstacle In Between by confuzdlilgirl |
13-Nov-02/6:47 AM |
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| Re: Ode to a Depleted Uranium Shell by Yardbird |
13-Nov-02/9:17 AM |
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I feel guily for laughing at the last line, I like the angle your coming from, I'll email it to tony 'poodle' blair
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
13-Nov-02/9:23 AM |
your poem reminded me of van gogh chopping his ear off and painting with it ! Not putting a line break at the end was not wise, therefore the wisdom you seek is here.............PUT IN A LINE BREAK< RESUBMIT POEM, your vote eill be waaaay better.
quite liked the poem 6 (would have given 8)
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13-Nov-02/9:27 AM |
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glad i never played with you !
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| Re: me by spazzman15 |
13-Nov-02/9:32 AM |
7/10 Bollocks ! what the hell do people expect Shakespeare@we'reallfuckingbetter.com to submit poems?
This is so close to a 10 Bo Dereks nipples are shitting themselves.
Hey spazzman this is a daisy, well done man
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| Re: Prose poem written in 1 minute and 27 seconds while listening to Slim Cessna croon by poetandknowit |
14-Nov-02/6:57 AM |
Women say the average man takes only 2 minutes for sex, you only take 87 seconds to write this,, Why dont you give all us guys something to read when shagging !
Your new jobs sorted ! 9/10
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
14-Nov-02/7:38 AM |
I LIKED IT,
THINK YOU COULD IMPROVE THE LAST LINE.
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14-Nov-02/7:52 AM |
Hi Jackie,
I liked the line 'tears are
just words that the heart cannot say'.
Love is a very true lie, and a very cruel kindness.
i think you have a seed of talent, post more to us and your seed will grow in the tears you evoke.
I give 7, and my guess is when you see the votes you will be confused, I have voted on the basis that you just wanted to know if people liked it, and no more.
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14-Nov-02/7:55 AM |
Give me more, should have called this 'an ode to leatherface'
how d'yah use it/
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14-Nov-02/7:56 AM |
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| Re: untitled by purplestain |
14-Nov-02/7:59 AM |
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Not bad my philosophical stain
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| Re: ... by logun2002ya |
14-Nov-02/8:03 AM |
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A true mindfucker of a poem, i want to read it again after reflection and maybe re-vote, watch this space i may have questions.
wheres the paracetomol
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| Re: The Darkness Without You by Bonehiss |
15-Nov-02/1:20 AM |
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Was just getting into it, and it ended prematurely, needs more ooomphh
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15-Nov-02/1:23 AM |
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| Re: You wouldn't Accept by GTK |
15-Nov-02/1:36 AM |
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Such a horible experience needs more beautiful words, baptize yourself in your emotion more, liked it enough - 6
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| Re: Stars Of The Sky by GTK |
15-Nov-02/1:38 AM |
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too sugary, post an angry poem
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| Re: School. by cleverdevice |
15-Nov-02/3:38 AM |
God forgive me for laughing when they violated you in the hinges, very poignant, original slant on bullying, liked the style of it, self pity with style, and i'm thinking of the time i glued a paper penis on neil bentleys head.
i'm giving this a 9, you missed one for not killing the bastards , kill kill kill !
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15-Nov-02/3:41 AM |
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Ahh yes, the netball skirts, mmmmm
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| Re: The Real You by jonny2000 |
15-Nov-02/3:50 AM |
Liked the whole turtle thing.
Horus is right your user name sucks like A scene from the Oval office, change it to something like funkyspunkydwarfmonkey.
i'm high
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