on Goodbye Daddy by NewbieMe
13 Nov 2002, 6:10 AM
forgot to vote 7/10
on Obstacle In Between by confuzdlilgirl
13 Nov 2002, 6:47 AM
COOL
on Ode to a Depleted Uranium Shell by Yardbird
13 Nov 2002, 9:17 AM
I feel guily for laughing at the last line, I like the angle your coming from, I'll email it to tony 'poodle' blair
on some deleted poem
13 Nov 2002, 9:23 AM
your poem reminded me of van gogh chopping his ear off and painting with it ! Not putting a line break at the end was not wise, therefore the wisdom you seek is here.............PUT IN A LINE BREAK< RESUBMIT POEM, your vote eill be waaaay better.
quite liked the poem 6 (would have given 8)
quite liked the poem 6 (would have given 8)
on some deleted poem
13 Nov 2002, 9:27 AM
glad i never played with you !
on me by spazzman15
13 Nov 2002, 9:32 AM
7/10 Bollocks ! what the hell do people expect Shakespeare@we'reallfuckingbetter.com to submit poems?
This is so close to a 10 Bo Dereks nipples are shitting themselves.
Hey spazzman this is a daisy, well done man
This is so close to a 10 Bo Dereks nipples are shitting themselves.
Hey spazzman this is a daisy, well done man
on Prose poem written in 1 minute and 27 seconds while listening to Slim Cessna croon by poetandknowit
14 Nov 2002, 6:57 AM
Women say the average man takes only 2 minutes for sex, you only take 87 seconds to write this,, Why dont you give all us guys something to read when shagging !
Your new jobs sorted ! 9/10
Your new jobs sorted ! 9/10
on some deleted poem
14 Nov 2002, 7:38 AM
I LIKED IT,
THINK YOU COULD IMPROVE THE LAST LINE.
THINK YOU COULD IMPROVE THE LAST LINE.
on some deleted poem
14 Nov 2002, 7:52 AM
Hi Jackie,
I liked the line 'tears are
just words that the heart cannot say'.
Love is a very true lie, and a very cruel kindness.
i think you have a seed of talent, post more to us and your seed will grow in the tears you evoke.
I give 7, and my guess is when you see the votes you will be confused, I have voted on the basis that you just wanted to know if people liked it, and no more.
I liked the line 'tears are
just words that the heart cannot say'.
Love is a very true lie, and a very cruel kindness.
i think you have a seed of talent, post more to us and your seed will grow in the tears you evoke.
I give 7, and my guess is when you see the votes you will be confused, I have voted on the basis that you just wanted to know if people liked it, and no more.
on some deleted poem
14 Nov 2002, 7:55 AM
Give me more, should have called this 'an ode to leatherface'
how d'yah use it/
how d'yah use it/
on some deleted poem
14 Nov 2002, 7:56 AM
my ribs swayed
on untitled by purplestain
14 Nov 2002, 7:59 AM
Not bad my philosophical stain
on ... by logun2002ya
14 Nov 2002, 8:03 AM
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A true mindfucker of a poem, i want to read it again after reflection and maybe re-vote, watch this space i may have questions.
wheres the paracetomol
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A true mindfucker of a poem, i want to read it again after reflection and maybe re-vote, watch this space i may have questions.
wheres the paracetomol
on The Darkness Without You by Bonehiss
15 Nov 2002, 1:20 AM
Was just getting into it, and it ended prematurely, needs more ooomphh
on some deleted poem
15 Nov 2002, 1:23 AM
it cracked me up !
on You wouldn't Accept by GTK
15 Nov 2002, 1:36 AM
Such a horible experience needs more beautiful words, baptize yourself in your emotion more, liked it enough - 6
on Stars Of The Sky by GTK
15 Nov 2002, 1:38 AM
too sugary, post an angry poem
on School. by cleverdevice
15 Nov 2002, 3:38 AM
God forgive me for laughing when they violated you in the hinges, very poignant, original slant on bullying, liked the style of it, self pity with style, and i'm thinking of the time i glued a paper penis on neil bentleys head.
i'm giving this a 9, you missed one for not killing the bastards , kill kill kill !
i'm giving this a 9, you missed one for not killing the bastards , kill kill kill !
on some deleted poem
15 Nov 2002, 3:41 AM
Ahh yes, the netball skirts, mmmmm
on The Real You by jonny2000
15 Nov 2002, 3:50 AM
Liked the whole turtle thing.
Horus is right your user name sucks like A scene from the Oval office, change it to something like funkyspunkydwarfmonkey.
i'm high
Horus is right your user name sucks like A scene from the Oval office, change it to something like funkyspunkydwarfmonkey.
i'm high